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The two women moved together, quietly through the misty maze. "Ginger, staff count." One requested through her headset. The dim light glinted off the mirrored shades perched on the top of her head. Her companion cast wild eyes around, like a nervous, frightened rabbit.
"Two casualties, one capture." She nodded an acknowledgement although she knew Ginger could not see her. "Boytoy's got six casualties and three captures." She snapped her gum and tallied up the score. Not bad, all things considered. "Angel, quit your gum. I'm getting static."
"Sorry." She took the grey lump of sticky chewed gum from her mouth and stuck it over a motion sensor, promptly disabling the laser overhead. They had to shoot down the second laser mounted on the automatic door before it would slide open, but a little wire-jiggling did the same; she wasn't called Picklock for nothing!
"Heads up, Herald," She unslung her laser rifle and put on the shades. A triangular wedge split the corridor in two. Herald gave a gratified smile. This would be the last stretch of this stimulation exercise. Never one for such things, she was eager to get it over with. With a little more confidence, she ran down the right lane. Picklock took a moment to check the level on her laser charge meter, pop a fresh strip of gum in her mouth, then took the left.
"Stay right where you are, Herald!" The 'enemy' nudged the back sensor panel on Herald's bodysuit with his laser. Obediently she set down her weapon and let herself be herded out of the narrow lane to where the corridor opened up again.
"Oh no you don't." Picklock emerged from the other path, nozzle jabbing Boytoy's temple. He let go of his laser automatically, letting it fall to his side.
"The gate lasers weren't shot out. You're going to get into a lot of trouble with shorting that door again."
"That's my problem. Where's that last guy?"
"Right here." A spot of red light appeared between her eyes. She hissed and cursed. "Hand him here." The last of Boytoy's team circled closer, carefully.
"Sure, catch!" She crouched down suddenly and knocked Boytoy's legs out from under him with a sweeping kick that sent him sprawling atop the other man, whom she shot as she got up. Boytoy looked ruefully up at her.
"You never play by the rules, do you, Angela." And pushed sweat-soaked hair out of his eyes.
"Only my own, Boytoy." She grinned in reply and shot him in the front panel.