3. Which will be simplest to understand?
After all the above has been done you have the REPORT OUTLINE.
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WRITING THE FIRST DRAFT.
1. Find a Quiet Place.
2. Write about what is most interesting to you first to help you get started.
3. Don't worry about grammar or punctuation at this time.
4. Circle the words you doubt (as to pertinence and spelling) and correct latter.
5. Don't slow down or stop to correct your work at this time.This is your "creative" time!
6. Take a break. Later, when you return to the report, you can read it more objectively.
READING AND REVISING YOUR OWN REPORT DRAFT.
1. Type your draft. This helps reveal how the reader will interpret it.
2. Check for clearness. Search for passages that are vague or ambiguous.
3. Make your statements brief, factual, and in a logical sequence (first things first).
- a. State the topic of paragraphs in the first sentence.
- b. Develop the topic with the remaining sentences.
- c. Do not include sentences that do not support the topic (don't CHANGE the subject).
- d. Be sure you are not requiring the reader to guess or assume anything!
4. Check for the correct tone and style.
- a. Find the best writing level.
- 1. Generalize, define terms, and write more informative for nontechnical readers.
- 2. Use only terms that you know will be recognized.
5. Stay on the subject.
- a. Each paragraph must be analyzed and evaluated as to whether it is pertinent
- b. Be as direct and specific as possible. Include only pertinent information (don't ramble).
6. Use simple words.
- a. Use the simplest and clearest word possible. Long words tend to
confuse.
7. Remove unnecessary comments and words.
- a. Example 1:
- "For your information, we've tested your spectrum analyzer and are of the opinion it needs calibration."
- Could be changed to:
- "We have tested your spectrum analyzer and consider it needs calibration."
- b. Example 2:
- "If you require more information, please feel free to telephone Mr. Thompson at 555-9039."
- Could be changed to:
- "For further information please telephone Mr. thompson at 555-9039."
8. Checking for accuracy.
- a. Once it's in print it is difficult to correct.
- b. Inaccurate facts and statements reduce the reader's confidence in you and your report.
- c. The report writer is responsible for its accuracy.
9. Revising the draft.
- a. This revision process continues until the report is succinct and informative.
- b. Important questions to ask when revising the draft:
- 1. Can your readers understand you?
- 2. Will the reader become lost?
- 3. Is your focus right?
- 4. Is your report reader-oriented?
- 5. Are the important points clearly visible?
- 6. Summarize the important points in your opening statements.
- 7. Is your information correct?
- 8. Is it accurate?
- 9. Is it complete?
- 10. Is all of it necessary?
- 11. Is your language good?
- 12. Is it clear, definite, and unambiguous?
- 13. Are there any grammar, punctuation, or spelling errors?
- 14. Does every paragraph start with a topic sentence?
- 15. Have you used long words where simpler and shorter words would do?
- 16. Are there any low information content words and phrases?
- 17. Is your report as concise as possible while still meeting my reader's needs?
10. Reviewing the Final Draft.
- a. Would you want to receive what you have written?
- b. What response will it produce from the reader?
- c. Is this the reaction you want?
11. If there is any doubt about the items in 10 above, request an independent reviewer.