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To Jill B.'s essay on the poem Sympathy
written by Paul Laurence Dunbar

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In the poem Sympathy the author uses very detailed, descriptive words. They are used in a very unique way, in my point of view.
One really good line that stood out to me was, "The blood is red on the cruel bars." That line almost makes you feel the pain the bird is going through, but I think the author is using the bird as a reference to his own pain. Back when he wrote this poem, slavery had not been over for very long and he was a young African-American. The situation must have been very hard on him. With this line, you can actually picture the blood on the bars in the back of your mind.
Another example would be, "The pain still throbs in the old scars." In this line, I think he's talking abou the scars on his parents and himself caused by slavery and the treatment of African-Americans. These scars are on the inside as well as the outside. The emotional pain in this poem is very great. Because his parents were slaves, you can tell he is showing that they, and he, edured an enormous amount of pain and suffering.
The line, "When his wing is bruised and bosom sore." lets you know that he is in a lot of pain because of the bruises, inside and out. As bad as the description sounds, you get the impression that he doesn't know if the pain will ever stop.
As you can see, the author uses very interesting words and a different way of comparing things. Paul isn't quite done yet, though. In his poem, he throws in an awesome simile, "And the river flows like a stream of glass." Paul is describing how calm the water is and how smooth it can be. I think he is talking about what freedom is like, compared to slavery with it's bloody bars and bruises.
I adore the way Paul Dunbar uses his vocabulary. He sounds like he puts a lot of thought and effort into his words. If you ever get the chance to read any of his work, go for it! It will change the way you look at things.

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