Bottle on the Ocean Floor

Bottle on the Ocean Floor

Cassidy Melczak

Drunken sailor
Dropped his bottle over the ship
It fell
It dropped down to the ocean bottom
Plop
...
Amongst the seaweed and in the sand

I wrote this at Kent State, as a response to a picture. We had to write about the picture and use a certain format. The numbers in our phone numbers was to be the number of syllables in each line. (My phone number is 4829109 if you want to check) Also for a 0 we had to put an ellipsis (...) I think it turned out well. My picture was of a diver picking up a bottle from the ocean floor.

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