The Place 2 Be

Critique of Sonnet 126
SHAKESPEARE’S SONNETS

Theme:      Time versus Nature
Content:    A 12-line poem with a non-Shakespearean aabbccddeeff rhyme sequence. The rhyme scheme is a fitting end signifying the end of the relationship with the Young Man.

O thou my lovely boy, who in thy power
Dost hold time's fickle glass, his sickle-hour;
Who hast by waning grown, and therein show'st
Thy lovers withering as thy sweet self grow'st

If nature, sovereign mistress over wrack,
As thou goest onwards still will pluck thee back,
She keeps thee to this purpose: that her skill
May time disgrace, and wretched minutes kill.

Yet fear her, O thou minion of her pleasure!
She may detain but not still keep her treasure.
Her audit, though delayed, answered must be,
And her quietus is to render thee.

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This sonnet brings all the main characters of the 1-126 series together at the finale (original Quarto spelling):

O Thou my lovely Boy, who in thy power                                    lovely Boy
Doest hould times fickle glasse,his sickle,hower:                          Time
Who hast by wayning growne, and therein shou'st,                       Henri South
Thy louers withering, as thy sweet selfe grow'st.                           Henri Wriothesly
If Nature(soueraine misteres ouer wrack)                                    Nature
As thou goest onwards still will plucke thee backe,                      Will
She keepes thee to this purpose,that her skill.                              Shekspur
May time disgrace, and wretched mynuit kill.                               Time
Yet feare her O thou minnion of her pleasure,                              Nature (her)
She may detaine,but not still keepe her tresure.                            Nature (her)
  Her Audit(though delayd)answer'd must be,                              Nature (her)
  And her Quietus is to render thee.                                             Nature (her)


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