Theme: Young Man
Content: A follow-on from Sonnet 13 & 14 providing a far more subtle and disguised encouragement for the subject to father children.
When I consider
every thing that grows
Holds in perfection
but a little moment,
That this huge stage
presenteth nought
but shows
Whereon the stars
in secret influence comment;
- "When I consider that all living things hold perfection for just a moment in their life and that the world has nothing but showy things on which the heavens secretly observe and pass comment."
- Repeat of the significance of holds from Sonnet 13 signifying the temporary hold that a subject has on their beauty.
- The play on the significance of stars is extended from Sonnet 14 with several words for which st is significant.
- This first quatrain is centred on what the speaker thinks: When I consider.
When I perceive
that men as plants increase,
Cheered and checked even by the selfsame sky;
Vaunt in their youthful sap, at height decrease,
And wear their brave state
out of memory:
- "When I see men, like plant life, change with the weather and achieve youthful climax then diminish as they age."
- Possible play on "conceive" in the con of Q1 and perceive in Q2.
- Stars again echoed in state.
- This second quatrain is centred on what the speaker sees: When I perceive.
- The sentiments of the first 2 quatrains, with their likening of human life to plants and the brevity of life being held in perfection, echo the Burial of the Dead section of the Book of Common Prayer: "Man that is born of a woman hath but a short time to live, and is full of misery. He cometh up, and is cut down, like a flower; he fleeth as it were a shadow, and never continueth in one stay".
Then the conceit
of
this inconstant
stay
Sets you most
rich
in youth
before
my sight,
Where wasteful
time debateth with decay
To change your
day of youth
to sullied night;
- "You are now rich in youth but will inevitably grow old."
- The first 2 quatrains opened with When and the third shifts to Then.
- The first 2 quatrains' words consider and perceive are now combined to create conceit, almost "conceive".
- Mid-line rhyme of wasteful with sullied.
- Repeat of many key words from Sonnet 14 driving home the same sentiments.
- This quatrain now turns its attention to the subject having set the scene of the broader picture earlier with emphasis on you words. This is rather like a single panoramic film shot panning the sky and then gravitating down to ultimately focus on the single subject.
- Stars again echoed in inconstant, stay, most and wasteful.
- The nought of Q1 now morphs to night, something unwelcome but at least something of substance and better than nothing/nought.
And all in war with time for love of
you,
As he takes from you,
I engraft you new.
- "As time takes away your youth, I use that time to graft new ones (children) on you via my verse."
- The plant analogy concludes with the use of the word engraft and the verse itself literally grafts the word new onto the subject.
- The night of Q2 now morphs to new, something very welcome, of substance and far better than nought or night.
- The rhyme of new with you emphasises the plea to the subject of creating a new you.
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