Theme: Time
Content: A protest against destructive Time who kills everything in his path including the poet's subject, except his subject will live for evermore in the poet's verse.
- A graphic and powerful portrayal of Time as the killer of mortal and resurrected life.
- Earth is cited as a forced accomplice to time by being made to devour life just as Time does.
- Ou words are related to Time: Devouring, thou, devour.
Make glad
and sorry seasons
as
thou fleet'st,
And do whate'er thou wilt, swift-footed time,
To the wide world and all her fading sweets.
But I forbid thee one most heinous crime:
- Time is omnipotent across the world, committing global crimes, but there is one thing that the poet forbids Time that is more awful than what he has already listed.
- The poet here is placing himself as more powerful than omnipotent Time by believing himself able to forbid Time of something.
- Time is now portrayed as not wholly destructive as it is capable of creating glad seasons as well as sorry ones.
- Ou words continue to relate to Time: thou, thou, heinous.
O, carve not with thy hours my love's fair
brow,
Nor draw
no lines there with thine antique pen.
Him in thy course untainted do allow
For beauty's pattern
to
succeeding men.
- Time's scythe, alluded to in earlier sonnets, is here denied access to age the subject's beauty as it is for on-passing to future generations.
- The subject's ageing is classified as more heinous a crime by Time than the killing of life as listed earlier.
- The subject is again cited as the pattern of all beauty.
- The paws and jaws of the lion and tiger in Q1 morph to Time drawing in Q3.
- Time's antique pen contrasts with the subject's pattern of beauty.
- Ou words continue to relate to Time: hours, course.
Yet do thy worst, old time; despite thy wrong
My love shall in my verse ever live young.
- A surprising counter to the previous quatrain by allowing Time to do its worse, as the subject's youth will be immortalised in the poet's verse.
- The only ou word in the couplet is now represented by the subject showing that the subject will beat Time: young.
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