Theme: Fallibility
Content: A defence of the subject by the author who is the victim of the subject's betrayal.
No more be grieved at that which thou hast
done:
Roses have thorns,
and silver fountains
mud.
Clouds and eclipses stain
both moon and sun,
And loathsome
canker lives in sweetest
bud.
- Although the subject is told not to grieve for what he has done, none of the similes assign culpability to the simile subjects: the roses' thorns, the fountains' mud, the moon & sun's clouds & eclipses, and the bud's canker are all distinct from the simile subjects and not their failing.
- The reference to Roses may be a pun on the subject's name who may have been Henry Wriothesley, Earl of Southampton.
- The similes assign beauty and scent (rose), silver (fountains), heavenly stature (moon & sun) and sweetness (bud) to the subject.
- th and t links items that are the cause of badness: thorns, stain, and loathsome.
All men make faults,
and even I in this,
Authorising thy trespass
with compare,
Myself corrupting
salving thy amiss,
Excusing thy sins
more than thy sins are;
- The author joins in the subject's guilt by accusing himself of fault, corruption, and Excusing beyond the sin.
- Authorising continues the th alliteration accompanied by t words that do the same: faults, trespass, corrupting,
For to thy sensual
fault I bring in sense
Thy adverse party is thy advocate
And 'gainst myself a lawful
plea commence.
Such civil war
is in my love and hate
- The author offers reason to explain the subject's offence which is for the author, the subject's adversary, to plead in the subject's favour against himself.
- Fault is now assigned directly to the subject instead of to men in general.
- Counterpoint between the subject's sensuality and the author's sense.
- The author pleads love for the subject and hate of himself, identifying himself as the metaphorical thorn, mud, cloud, and canker of Q1.
- t alliteration continues: fault and hate.
- Mid-line rhyme of law with war.
That I an accessory needs must be
To that sweet
thief which sourly robs from
me.
- The author offers to be an accomplice to the thief that robbed him of his subject, out of need.
- The sweet quality originally assigned to the subject is now transferred to the thief.
- Counterpoint between the sweet thief that acted sourly.
- The reference to robs may be a pun on the subject's name who may have been Robert Dudley, Duke of Northumberland.
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