The Place 2 Be

Critique of Sonnet 94
SHAKESPEARE’S SONNETS

Theme:     Sweetness turns Sour
Content:   2 quatrains of flattery of his subject's power then the 3rd. quatrain introducing doubt of his subject's worth by way of floral metaphor. Ending with a very powerful final couplet that resolves both themes. High contrast between the perceived qualities of the author and subject.


They that have power to hurt and will do none,
That do not do the thing they most do show,


Who moving others are themselves as stone,
Unmoved, cold, and to temptation slow:


They rightly do inherit heaven's graces,
And husband nature's riches from expense;


They are the lords and owners of their faces,
Others but stewards of their excellence.


The summer's flower is to the summer sweet,
Though to itself it only live and die;


But if that flower with base infection meet,
The basest weed outbraves his dignity:


For sweetest things turn sourest by their deeds;
Lilies that fester smell far worse than weeds.


Supplementary observations:

The superficially flattering tone of the first 2 quatrains, I think, is supported by lines 1-2 which compliments those that don't abuse their power. Yet it turns on "That do not do the thing they most do show" that alludes again to the sonnet's "Don't judge a book by its cover" theme in an avalanche of "do's" that contradict the subject's actual inertia.Divine flattery follows in the next quatrain which is book-ended
by "rightly do inherit heaven's graces" and "their excellence". The sonnet points to the subject being someone like James I here, methinks: uncharismatic and claiming the Divine Right of Kings.

The author deliberately flatters to deceive in Q1-Q2, just as the "flower with base infection" in Q3 does.

The language is explicitly impersonal with no use of second person, but the subject matter and tone markedly change in Q3 with subjective, external observations of the subject's traits being replaced by infection existing at the subject's core. Q3 sets up the mighty final couplet like the bridge between a song's verse and chorus.

Especially notable is the extreme drop the subject suffers in the author's estimation: from being the absolute "sweetest" to the absolute "sourest" in line 1.

There is no explicit identification of "you", perhaps for fear of explicitly aggravating the intended subject: the author can say what he feels by making what are ostensibly general remarks without getting personal - it's rather like a remark one might make in the company of others intended for a specific person in the group but said in a way that it appears to be a general observation. I detect changes in tone from the person who is described as inheriting "heaven's graces" to the same subject who is now a "flower with base infection" to the no-holds-barred festering lily that smells "far worse than weeds". There's a progressive deterioration in the subject's condition that goes from unnoticeable, to inherent, to odious. I feel the backbone of the sonnet is the morphing of "power" (Q1-2) to "flower" (Q3) to "sour" (C).

It has the quality of being taken both personal and impersonal. The subject strikes me as someone with considerable power and authority that perhaps caused that ambiguity - probably not James I although he does seem to fit the subject of this sonnet very well to me.


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