Monday, November 24, 1997 - Seeing More Clearly

Watched the film again last night. It's amazing how a change in environment and a few days can make a difference in your point of view.

I think the beginning flows together pretty smoothly. The ending will be stronger if I move a few things around. Specifically, Carol by the pool needs to happen earlier. Where it presently is doesn't make much sense. I mean she's already seen Michael and Mary cruise away in his car. How come she's so relaxed and happy? I should put it after Mary's Video Show. It will be a much better set up for the end of the film. I think this is where it was in the initial script anyway.

-George