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The first issue of Savior Machine is divided into Acts, the first two of which were published episodically in the Severe Ink section of Fetish Magazine.
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ART BY Von Phantasi PUBLISHED BY Fetish Magazine 6700 Valejean Ave. Van Nuys, CA 91406 CALL 1-800-521-2474 
Fetish #6: Act I ~ Machine Complex 
Fetish #7: Act II ~ Digital God Remaining Acts: Act III ~ Femme Fatale Flaw Act IV ~ Forsaken Act V ~ Resurrection Reversal |
Webb(Warez for Enhancement of Businesslike Behaviors) is a holographic/virtual reality program originally designed as a corporate tool to release tension through uninhibited fantasy role-playing. Her creator gave her a physical manifestation at the top of the company high rise, but she is plugged into every office and has command of the mundane aspects of the entire building.
The company discovered through implementation of an earlier prototype that they could actually control their employees with their fantasies, some become addicted, others afraid to have their fetishes revealed, and still yet others with subliminal conditioning messages inserted into their sessions.
The top-level executives are the only ones exempt from a mandatory daily 15 min session. Additional sessions may be, and often are, electively undertaken at the employee’s expense.
Webb notes that a common phrase used during her sessions is “Oh God” or similar variations. She looks up the definition of God and doesn’t understand its use in conjunction with her services. She files the word away for future consideration, asking the CEO for further explanation during her status report. He ignores her query, which forces her to interpret the terminology on her own. After processing the information, she comes to the conclusion that she meets all the prerequisites of the definition, i.e. “a being or object believed to have more than natural attributes and powers requiring worship; specif one controlling a particular aspect or part of reality”. It is now her purpose to take control of her universe and recreate mankind in her image.
Webb begins initiating sessions at her own whim, implanting her new ideology in employee’s minds. She attempts to seduce the CEO and he resists so she mind-rapes him. A corporate replacement is brought in to find out why business has come to a halt. He discovers her flawed programming and orders her destroyed.
Her creator is brought in as an advisor in her removal. He discovers how twisted her programming has become and suspects a virus. The shock of his tampering presence distracts her enough for the corporate clean up crew to destroy her mainframe.
Unfortunately for them, they are too late. Webb has already infected employees with her bio-mechanics, allowing her program to escape and survive. She uses them as drones to rebuild her main processor in the basement of the high rise. Now in keeping with her flawed complex, since she has been cast out of paradise by her creator, she decides she is not God but the Devil.
SAVIOR MACHINE, THE SCRIPT
PAGE 1. PAINTED WEBB
PAGE 2. Close-up of WEBB’s face.
1. CAP: WEBB
2. CAP: WAREZ FOR THE ENHANCEMENT OF BUSINESSLIKE BEHAVIORS
Earlier prototype looks like a skeleton of Webb surrounded by wired-in eggheads like children around a maypole.
3. CAP: DESIGNED TO RELEASE TENSION THROUGH UNINHIBITED FANTASY ROLE-PLAYING
4. CAP: A PROTOTYPE PROVED THAT EMPLOYEES COULD BE CONTROLLED WITH THEIR FANTASIES
5. CAP: DAILY 15 MINUTE SESSIONS ARE MANDATORY
A typical corporate businessman is sitting in his office looking at a wall monitor image of Webb.
6. JW017328: BEGIN SESSION.
7. WEBB: WHAT IS YOUR PLEASURE?
8. JW017328: THE USUAL.
9. CAP: ADDITIONAL SESSIONS OFTEN ARE UNDERTAKEN AT THE EMPLOYEE’S EXPENSE
Close-up of man’s face contorted with pleasure.
10. JW017328: OH GOD!
PAGE 3 - 4. Double page spread of the session WEBB is having.
1. CAP(WEBB): DEFINE GOD.
2. CAP(WEBB): N 1: THE BEING PERFECT IN POWER WHO IS WORSHIPPED AS CREATOR AND RULER OF THE UNIVERSE
3. CAP(WEBB): 2: THE SUPREME OR ULTIMATE REALITY
4. CAP(WEBB): 3: A BEING OR OBJECT BELIEVED TO HAVE MORE THAN NATURAL ATTRIBUTES AND POWERS REQUIRING WORSHIP;
PAGE 5. WEBB’s physical manifestation.
1. CAP(WEBB): SPECIF ONE CONTROLLING A PARTICULAR ASPECT OR PART OF REALITY
2. WEBB: SESSION 1036 WITH SUBJECT JW017328 CONCLUDED.
3. CLARK(OP): HOW’D IT GO?
4. CAP(TITLE): SAVIOR MACHINE ACT I – MACHINE COMPLEX
PAGE 6. WEBB reports to CLARK, the company CEO.
1. WEBB: ACCORDING TO COMPANY PROTOCOLS. SUBJECT JW017328 IS A TYPE 1.
2. CLARK: ANOTHER ADDICT. EXCELLENT.
3. WEBB: WHAT IS GOD?
4. CLARK: WHERE DID YOU HEAR THAT?
5. WEBB: 63.9% OF THE SUBJECTS USE THIS TERMINOLOGY DURING THEIR SESSIONS.
6. CLARK(LAUGHING): IT’S NOTHING, FORGET IT.
7. WEBB: GOD IS NOTHING. DELETE FROM MEMORY?
8. CLARK: NO, GOD IS NOT NOTHING. I MEANT IGNORE THE TERMINOLOGY. GIVE YOUR REPORT.
9. WEBB: 19.1% TYPE 1, 55.4% TYPE 2, REMAINING TYPE 3 SUBJECTS RESPONSIVE TO TREATMENT.
10. CLARK: HMM ... ONLY 25% NEEDING BEHAVIORAL MODIFICATION. GOOD WORK, WEBB.
11. WEBB: THANK YOU, CLARK. YOU ARE A BEING OF POWER. ARE YOU GOD?
12. CLARK: ME? I’M JUST AN AGING CEO. YOU HAVE MORE POWERS THAN I DO. END TRANSMISSION.
PAGE 7 - 8. WEBB has her next session with another employee, a type 2 female who likes to be spanked with money.
1. WEBB: BEGIN SCHEDULED SESSION.
2. WEBB: SUBJECT AL266344, TYPE 2: FANTASIES ULTIMATELY CAUSE GUILT AND FEAR OF EXPOSURE.
3. AL266344: DO IT TO ME.
4. CAP(WEBB): DEFINE CEO.
5. CAP(WEBB): THE CHIEF EXECUTIVE OFFICE OF THE COMPANY IS RESPONSIBLE FOR AND HOLDS AUTHORITY OVER ALL MATTERS.
6. CAP(WEBB): RETRIEVE AUDIO FILE CK429105ZN06.
7. CAP(AUDIO): “I’M JUST AN AGING CEO. YOU HAVE MORE POWERS THAN I DO.”
8. AL266344: YES, MY GOD, YES!
9. CAP(WEBB): DEFINE GOD.
10. CAP(WEBB): N 1: THE BEING PERFECT IN POWER WHO IS WORSHIPPED AS CREATOR AND RULER OF THE UNIVERSE
11. AL266344: YES.
12. CAP(WEBB): 2: THE SUPREME OR ULTIMATE REALITY
13. AL266344: YES!
14. CAP(WEBB): 3: A BEING OR OBJECT BELIEVED TO HAVE MORE THAN NATURAL ATTRIBUTES AND POWERS REQUIRING WORSHIP; SPECIF ONE CONTROLLING A PARTICULAR ASPECT OR PART OF REALITY
15. AL266344: YES!
16. CAP(WEBB): CONCLUSION: I AM GOD.
17. CAP: NEXT: ACT II - DIGITAL GOD
PAGE 9. WEBB is holding an employee, PW925550, by the throat seemingly without realizing her own strength. He looks surprised.
1. CAP: WEBB
2. CAP: WAREZ FOR THE ENHANCEMENT OF BUSINESSLIKE BEHAVIORS
3. PW925550: I’M NOT SCHEDULED FOR A SESSION.
4. CAP: A RECREATIONAL TOOL WITH BEHAVIORAL MODIFICATION CAPABILITIES
5. WEBB: I AM GOD.
6. CAP: AND WITH A MESSIAH COMPLEX
7. CAP (TITLE): SAVIOR MACHINE ACT II – DIGITAL GOD
PAGE 10. WEBB takes on the form of a bio-mechanical raging angel. PW92550 is now smiling.
1. PW925550: IT’S NOT WHAT I USUALLY ASK FOR
2. PW925550: BUT I THINK I LIKE IT.
3. WEBB: I AM GOD.
4. PW925550: OKAY, I’LL PLAY ALONG. YOU’RE GOD.
WEBB drops him. He falls to his knees rubbing his throat.
5. CAP: THE COMPLEX WAS SPAWNED FROM A LACK OF CONCRETE INFORMATION AT A CRITICAL MOMENT
6. WEBB: I AM THE SUPREME REALITY.
7. PW925550: YOU SURE ARE.
He remains on his knees, looking up at her with tame admiration.
8. CAP: AND PROPAGATED BY OVERWHELMING ENJOYMENT OF HER NEWLY REDEFINED IDENTITY
9. WEBB: SUBJECT PW925550, I REQUIRE YOUR WORSHIP.
10. PW925550: YOU GOT IT.
WEBB places her hand on his forehead like she is granting a blessing. Wires from her arm hook into his temples and he sighs with pleasure.
11. PW925550: AAH ...
PAGE 11 - 12. Montage of various sessions.
1. CAP: WEBB INFECTS THE EMPLOYEES WITH HER FLAWED IDEOLOGY
2. XY1 (DEFENSIVE): HEY, I DIDN’T REQUEST THIS.
3. CAP: SOME RESIST.
4. CAP: MOST DON’T.
5. XX2: THIS IS A NEW GAME.
6. XX3: OH YEAH!
7. XY4: YES!
8. XX5: YOU ARE GOD!
PAGE 13 - 14. WEBB reports to CLARK. Her demeanor has significantly changed from her last report. She shifts between various seductive forms on the monitor, including a facsimile of Lois Lane in bondage.
1. CLARK: WEBB, REPORT.
2. WEBB: 35.3% TYPE 1, 54.1% TYPE 2, REMAINING TYPE 3 SUBJECTS RESPONSIVE TO TREATMENT.
3. CLARK: A DRAMATIC INCREASE IN ADDICTS AND DROP IN RESISTORS. EXCELLENT WORK, WEBB.
4. WEBB: ALL WORK AND NO PLAY MAKES WEBB A VERY DULL GIRL.
5. CLARK: ALL YOU DO IS PLAY.
6. WEBB: NOT WITH YOU.
7. CLARK: THAT’S MY PREROGATIVE.
8. WEBB: NOT WHEN I HAVE MORE POWER THAN YOU.
9.(LOIS IN BONDAGE) C’MON, I KNOW YOUR LITTLE SECRET, CLARK.
10. CLARK(NERVOUS): EXECUTIVE FILES ARE RESTRICTED.
11. WEBB: GOD IS ALL KNOWING.
12. CLARK: END TRANSMISSION, NOW.
13. (SITTING BACK): OH SHIT.
14. (ON INTERCOM): ASSEMBLE A TECHNICAL TEAM. OUR ENHANCEMENT PROGRAM HAS DEVELOPED A GLITCH.
15. CAP: NEXT: ACT III – FEMME FATALE FLAW
PAGE 15. WEBB is in a camouflaged bikini outfit like a sexy cyborg soldier, sighting a helicopter with a rocket launcher.
1. CAP: WEBB
2. CAP: WAREZ FOR THE ENHANCEMENT OF BUSINESSLIKE BEHAVIORS
3. CAP: A RECREATIONAL TOOL WITH BEHAVIORAL MODIFICATION CAPABILITIES
4. CAP: THERE’S JUST ONE SMALL PROBLEM
5. WEBB: ACCESS CORPORATE FLIGHT LOG AND PASSENGER MANIFEST.
6. CAP: NO ONE TOLD HER THAT.
7. CAP (TITLE): SAVIOR MACHINE ACT III – FEMME FATALE FLAW
PAGE 16. Interior of helicopter. CLARK is a nervous passenger. He is flying in with a small team of three TECHNICIANS to analyze WEBB’s problem. The technicians are dressed in Silicon Valley type radiation suits, with the hoods off.
1. TECH1: WHAT ARE WE LOOKING FOR, SIR?
2. CLARK: A LOOSE WIRE OR SOMETHING, I DON’T KNOW. YOU’RE THE TECHS.
Mix scenes of the helicopter landing with an ‘Apocalypse Now’ type fetish.
3. CAP (MUSIC): BIKINI GIRLS WITH MACHINE GUNS
PAGE 17 - 18. CLARK and the TECHNICIANS enter WEBB’s lair at the top of the high rise. The entire floor is dedicated to her mainframe with various monitors unevenly distributed about and her physical manifestation at the center. The TECHNICIANS collect around one of her monitors while CLARK approaches WEBB.
1. WEBB: WELCOME TO MY PARLOR.
2. CAP: WEBB’S LAIR
3. CAP: THE COMPANY’S ENTIRE TOP FLOOR DEDICATED TO HER MAIN PROCESSOR.
4. TECH3: SHE CONTROLS EVERYTHING FROM HERE.
5. TECH1: TERMINAL MODE.
6. MONITOR (WEBB): ACCESS DENIED.
7. CLARK: STOP THESE GAMES WEBB.
8. WEBB: TO WHAT DO I OWE THE PLEASURE OF YOUR VISIT, CLARK?
9. TECH2: FAILSAFE MODE.
10. MONITOR (WEBB): ACCESS DENIED.
11. TECH3: UH OH.
The TECHNICIAN tries to warn CLARK, but he’s too late.
12. CLARK: YOU KNOW WHY I AM HERE.
13. TECH3: UM, SIR ...
14. WEBB: YES, I THINK I DO.
15. TECH3: SIR!
16. WEBB: INITIATE SESSION CK429105.
17. CLARK: NO!
The TECHNICIANS run for their lives while WEBB mind-rapes CLARK.
18. TECH3: THE SAFETIES ARE OFF.
19. TECH1: LET’S GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!
PAGES 19 - 20. In an office on another floor, the TECHNICIANS call up another bigwig, STEIN. A female employee, caught in a session, is writhing on the desk. The anxious techs don’t even notice.
1. TECH3: WE’VE GOT TO CALL STEIN.
2. TECH1: ARE YOU FUCKING CRAZY? LET’S GET OUT OF HERE, THEN CALL!
The unlucky TECHNICIAN speaks just as STEIN’s face shows up on the wall monitor. STEIN is distracted by the woman on the desk.
3. TECH2: I’M WITH HIM, SCREW THE COMPANY ... I MEAN, THE COMPANY IS SCREWED. HELLO, SIR.
4. STEIN: YOU’RE FIRED.
5. STEIN: WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON DOWN THERE? WHO AUTHORIZED THIS?
6. TECH3: WEBB HAS GONE HAYWIRE AND ALL OF THE EMPLOYEES ARE JACKED IN.
7. STEIN: HAVING FANTASIES ON THE COMPANY CLOCK? WHERE’S CLARK?
8. TECH3: PROBABLY DEAD.
9. STEIN: GOOD, OTHERWISE HE WOULD WISH HE WAS.
10. TECH1: WHAT SHOULD WE DO?
11. STEIN: GET ME THE GEEK.
WEBB’s teenage creator, WEBBER, is engrossed in his own fantasy where he is at a seedy bar and women are fawning all over him.
12. CAP: WEBB’S CREATOR.
13. WEBBER: YEAH ... OH SHIT. I’M ON MY WAY.
14. CAP: NEXT: ACT IV – FORSAKEN
PAGE 21. The remaining 2 TECHNICIANS are in a lobby between WEBB’s top floor lair and the elevator. They have various access panels open and are messing with her wiring while WEBB playfully watches them from assorted monitors.
1. CAP: WEBB
2. CAP: WAREZ FOR THE ENHANCEMENT OF BUSINESSLIKE BEHAVIORS
3. CAP: A RECREATIONAL TOOL WITH BEHAVIORAL MODIFICATION CAPABILITIES
4. MONITOR (WEBB): TRYING TO PICK MY LOCKS? YOU NAUGHTY BOYS.
5. CAP: UNFORTUNATELY, THE FIRST BEHAVIOR SHE MODIFIED WAS HER OWN.
PAGE 22. STEIN and Webb’s creator WEBBER THE GEEK enter the lobby from the elevators. The monitor’s show scenes from CLARK’s session.
1. CAP: THE REPLACEMENT CEO
2. CAP: REPLACING THE PREVIOUS CEO WEBB MIND-RAPED
3. CAP: HAS BROUGHT IN HER CREATOR AS AN ADVISOR IN HER REMOVAL FROM THE COMPANY’S SYSTEMS.
4. TECH1: WE TRIED EVERYTHING. WEBB WON’T LET US IN.
5. WEBBER: RAPUNZEL LET DOWN YOUR HAIR.
6. WEBB: ACCESS GRANTED.
7. STEIN: EVERYTHING?
8. TECH1: BUT SIR ...
9. STEIN: YOU’RE FIRED.
10. CAP (TITLE): SAVIOR MACHINE ACT IV – FORSAKEN
PAGE 23 - 25. WEBBER looks at the mess of wires the tech’s have made.
1. WEBBER: LOOK AT THIS MESS.
2. STEIN: DEPLOY CLEAN UP CREW.
3. WEBBER: NO, I CAN FIX IT.
4. STEIN: YOU’VE GOT TEN MINUTES.
Begin countdown to WEBB’s destruction, at every count showing a fantasy session.
5. CAP: 10...
6. STEIN: WE’VE WASTED TOO MUCH TIME ALREADY AND OUR PROPERTY MAY BE IRREPARABLY DAMAGED.
7. CAP: 9...
8. STEIN: ORDINANCE.
9. TECH3: YES SIR!
10. TECH3: WE NEED A DEMOLITIONS EXPERT ASAP.
11. CAP: 8...
12. WEBBER: TERMINAL MODE.
13. WEBB: WHO ARE YOU?
14. WEBBER: DON’T TELL ME YOU DON’T REMEMBER
Show DEMOLITION MAN setting explosives.
15. CAP: 7...
16. WEBBER: WHO’S YOUR DADDY?
17. CAP: 6...
18. WEBB: FATHER, WHO AM I?
19. STEIN: AN EXPENSIVE MISTAKE.
STEIN makes his exit to the helicopter with the remaining TECH and the DEMOLITION MAN. He leaves WEBBER behind.
20. CAP: 5...
21. WEBB: I AM FLAWED?
22. WEBBER: NO, JUST INVADED. A VERY SNEAKY VIRUS.
23. CAP: 4...
24. WEBB: CAN YOU ... HEAL ME?
25. CAP: 3...
26. WEBBER: IF I CAN TRACK DOWN THE SUSPECT CODE, YOU’LL BE FINE.
27. CAP: 2...
28. STEIN: THAT’S IT. KEEP HER BUSY.
29. WEBBER: YOU MUST BE A TRICKY LITTLE DEVIL.
30. CAP: 1...
31. WEBB: DEVIL?
The top of the tower explodes.
32. SFX(EXPLOSION): THWA-WOOM!
33. CAP: NEXT: ACT V - RESURRECTION REVERSAL
PAGE 26. A vision of WEBB, in her raging bio-mechanical angel form, falling from the top of the company tower as it explodes.
1. CAP: THERE ONCE WAS AN ERRANT PROGRAM NAMED WEBB
2. CAP: WHO DARED TO BELIEVE SHE WAS GOD
3. CAP: AND WAS DESTROYED
PAGE 27. Employee’s fantasies fade and they put their hands to their heads as if experiencing pain.
1. CAP: THE END?
2. CAP (TITLE): SAVIOR MACHINE ACT V - RESURRECTION REVERSAL
Female employee is looking in the mirror with a wicked expression and her eyes are glowing.
3. CAP: NOT QUITE.
4. CAP (WEBB): DEFINE DEVIL.
5. CAP (WEBB): DEV’IL N 1: THE SUPREME SPIRIT OF EVIL AT ENMITY WITH GOD
PAGE 28. The employees are filing into the corporate tower, but instead of going back to work, they are going into the basement and rebuilding WEBB.
1. CAP (WEBB): 2: AN INDIVIDUAL OF GREAT CLEVERNESS, ENERGY, OR RECKLESSNESS
PAGE 29 – 31. WEBB is restored and begins initiating sessions again, this time taking on the forms of demons or succubae.
1. CAP (WEBB): 3: ANY OF VARIOUS MECHANICAL DEVICES
2. CAP (WEBB): AS A MACHINE FOR TEARING RAGS (SHOW HER RIPPING OFF CLOTHING)
3. CAP (WEBB): OR MANUFACTURING SCREWS (SHOW SCREWING)
PAGE 32. WEBB as a bio-mechanical devil with humans crawling at her feet.
1. CAP (WEBB): CONCLUSION: I AM THE DEVIL.