An early memory
Rough Draft:


"FlashBack"


Flashback
3-2-1
Flashback
3-2-1
My god!  Make it stop!
Swing and run
Swing and run
3-2-1
Count down, then swing and run

Come on Jimmy-swing and run
Hit the ball, have some fun!

I sprang from the curb,
My shadow remained
Shadows speak of future pain
Prophetically-simply
Prophetic
Listen

I held the bat as the night held me,
Cradled me, and spoke to me
Startled me . . . and
Like the moonlight,
Craved my soul

Behind me, my brother stood,
Chewing gum on his breath
Strong arms
Under mine,
Positioning the bat

The ball: a chance, a blur, a bomb
I ran for fear . . .
As the night consumed me
My shadow-peered, then quaked
I fell into space


Flashback
3-2-1
Flashback
3-2-1
My god!  Make it stop!
Swing and run
Swing and run
3-2-1
Count down, then swing and run

Come on Jimmy-swing and run
Hit the ball, have some fun!

The swing:
A moment, a turn, a weapon
Streetlights darken,
My shadow disappears
3-2-1
Swing and run

Dampness on my head
Thick n' wet
2-3-2
Run, swing, count
Beside me, my brother kneels,
Chewing gum on his breath
Cherry?
Strawberry?
Strong arms under mine,
Positioning my head

Backflash
1-3-2
Swing, then . . .

My god!  Make it stop!
Swing and run
Swing and run
3-2-1
Count down, then swing and run


ã2000 James Olmos

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