THE NEEDLE IN THE HAYSTACK

He had been casually crossing the lot behind the house, when a frightful shadow passed over the ground in front of him. The bright moon had given a brief flash of a dark wing on the ground and the sound of flapping, like a shirt on the line in a strong wind. Only this was no shirt. The peace of the night was suddenly snatched from him and he darted into a haystack that had been near the fence since last fall. It was a useless pile of hay and weeds, but it seemed like a gift to him, as he heard the wings rise again.


Bravado knew how unwise it was for a mouse to venture out alone like this, but it was a pleasant night with that large moon, nearly full, and he just felt like a stroll. Angie had a nest up in the elm with the sounds of small owls peeping in it. They grew up so quickly, that their squeaks already seemed foreboding.


The haystack was a pile of refuse, not quite a compost heap, but not far from it either. It was damp and moldy down at the bottom, and squeezed up through some of the stems to higher ground where it was dry. He could hear Angie flying around, doing reconnaissance missions over the heap, and wondered how long he’d have to hide out before she gave up. Couldn’t she find some insects to eat? A mouse was far too large a meal for this late at night.


He poked his head out to take a peak, and there she was flying to the next tree to land on a branch and watch. It would be the waiting game. Maybe he should just find a place safe enough to curl up for the night. Then it occurred to him that the others might come out looking for him, and they might be grabbed up instead. No, that wasn’t a good solution. After the quick run to refuge, his heart was still pounding, and he wasn’t the least bit tired.


He could see Angie’s head, with the moon glinting on her feathers. Now that she knew she had him where she could see him venture out again, there was no hurry. A mouse had the same flaw as his mortal enemy: too curious and too sure of himself. He would poke his head out again. She pulled her neck down, like she was tired.


Bravado slinked through the hay and came across an old torn shirt. It was comfy, and he grabbed it and pulled it over on itself, forming a huge hammock under some of the brush. He lay down on it and folded his hands in his lap, staring up through the grass stems at the night sky. So many stars! If owls were supposed to be so darn wise, how come this one was so bent on a nighttime snack that she didn’t take the time to see the beautiful sky? He couldn’t hear any peeping, so it must be her own hunger she was trying to feed.


He lay there and considered options. Maybe she’d wear out and go to sleep. He could watch the tree and if she flew back to the nest, he could make a run for it. Maybe it he shouted loud enough, one of the others would hear him. Grandpa was usually near the coal chute by the basement late at night, blending into the spills bits of coal, as he smoked a late night pipe full. Naw, he’d never HEAR him, no matter how loud he squeaked. Even if he did, he might want to come have a look, and he’d never make it back through the coal window with his twig cane, before Angie spotted him. She’d probably be more than satisfied with a wiry old gray mouse.
That was scary, when he realized that she’d be much more please with a soft young mouse. He was tense, and he pulled the shirt, trying to get it to lay with a swoop, so he could curl his shoulders in it. It was caught on something. He felt around the top, where it was hanging down like a tent.


Ouch! It bit him. What is this? There’s a needle stuck here, right where the sleeve is torn. Someone was mending it, and through it out with the needle still in it. That oversight was dangerous. He put his paw to his mouth and licked it. Salty. He’d cut the skin. Hey! Hey! Hey! Now this could come in handy. He carefully pulled it out. It still had thread through the eye. He pulled it out and rolled it around his waist 3 times, making a belt.


He pulled the needle out carefully. It was small and easy to handle. Too small to get his fingers through the eye, so he had to grip around it. He jabbed at the hay with it and it went through easily.
A sword. That’s what he had. He could run across the lot with this and when Angie saw it, she wouldn’t dare try to grab him. He’d give her his most defiant Bravado mouse shout. Might work. But seemed foolish.


He peered out. There she was, with her head pulled down on her shoulders like a tired old vulture. He tried to crawl around through the straw to the side of the haystack nearest the house. It was hard to form a passageway, while holding the needle, so he used it ahead of him, poking it through. He could see Grenetta and Whistler peeking out between the slats of the porch skirt. He waved the needle at them, trying to make it glitter in the moonlight. They disappeared under the porch. Had they seen him? Were they telling the others?


Angie stretched and jumped off the branch. He must still be down there. He hadn’t come out into the light. She dove down over the haystack, beating her wings loudly. Sometimes that led the little creatures to think that they’d been spotted, and they’d give themselves away. Not this one. No movement at all. She swung up to another tree, near the house.


Bravado watched. She was blocking his way now. She tucked her head against her shoulders again, her beak silhouetted as she turned it in a circle. She raised the tops of her wings, shrugging and then relaxed to watch. Back to the waiting game.


Bravado poked the needle out into the light and waved it again. Her head swung around. She’d seen it, as he knew she would. She cruised down to have a better look.


He could hear her high pitched voice as she flew over. "Well, whoooo doooo we have here? Hoootahhh warrior? Ohhhh!"


He shouted back that she’d better watch herself, or she’d be shishkabob. All she heard was, "Squeak, wahhh urrreee squeakahhh beee bawwwbeee."


She circled around, puzzled that he’d had the guts to shout at her in his feeble mouse breath. She hooted again dive bombed. She heard his meager mousey voice again.
"Geeek awayyyy, orrrbeeee squeakahhh beee bawwwbeee!" There was another flash from the pile of hay, jabbing at the moon.


She fluttered and grabbed another branch. Strange little mouse! What was all that glitter and chatter? She watched, but the nest of hay lay quietly, as the crickets tuned their legs. Maybe a cricket would be enough till morning.


She did another dive off the branch and dove down over the wood pile. She glided down, but when she turned back up she had to beat her wings. They stopped strumming as she flew over. She had drowned out the string ensemble with her wings.


Bravado saw Whistler dash out from under the porch, not even looking around first. He took a deep breath, and scuttled down to the bottom of the heap, holding his silver lance in front of him.


Angie heard a wee voice over by the house and turned her head all the way around on her neck. Dinner! She bounced on the branch once, and catapulted herself across the lot. There was a small mouse steak, running into the dusty driveway. She pinned her wings against her body, and shot down towards him.


Bravado darted out of the haystack, heading straight for his cousin. "Back under the porch. Owl! Owl!" He held the needle in both hands, and headed straight for him.
Whistler stopped, staring as his older cousin ran towards him like he was going to do battle. Then he heard the wings. He froze then made a mad run for the porch.


Bravado was heading after him, out of breath, and trying to get out of the light. He had the needle tucked under his arm and held the dull end. The tip was sticking up over his shoulder.
Angie swooped for the little mouse, but he made it to the darkness under the porch. She banked and turned, coming back for the larger one. Bravado was running faster than he ever had in school.


She opened her feet, and was ready to grab him. She put her wings out and he saw the shadow. He stumbled, landing flat on his face in the dust. He could see the moon getting wider in Whistler’s eyes, as he held onto one of the slats under the porch.


Angie had him. It was a good night for mouse. She closed her talons, and got a sharp pain in her hip. Ouch! What was that? She beat her wings a couple times and as she raised up, she saw him get up and take off again. She had gained enough height for another dive. As she came down her stood with his back to a board, and held the needle out in front of him, shouting, "squeakahhh beee bawwwbeee!"


She hesitated. Her right hip hurt and she was flying a bit lopsided. Even in the darkness her eyes quickly focused on the long shiny shape. That was what he’d stuck her with, and now he was actually taking a stand. She circled, as she shouted at him, and went back to her tree.
Whistler couldn’t believe it. "Bravado, you just attacked on owl!"


He was out of breath from running and fear. "I ahhhh… don’t everrrr… run out… in the open… like that!"


"You saved me. We’ve got to tell the others."


They stayed up late that night. Grandpa got to take a break as Bravado told the entire story 3 times, while Whistler played with the needle, pretending to shishkabob the owl as it made its attack.


They put the needle on the top of the mantel in the kitchen wall, right under the picture of great great grandfather Friedrich who had come over on the boat.

© Copyright Douglas Young, 2001

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