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Julia & Cam - HONEYMOON LOVERS
You guys seem to have a rather brilliant working partnership.  This was
great - action & scariness, Frank & Rachel, and of course a bit of heat!!
I tell you though, the similarities between this and Sim's was decidedly
freaky!  I mean, I know great minds think alike, but this was just weird!  
Anyway, *I* was ready to punch whatshisname's lights out, so I was worried
as to how Frank would be feeling, and then I thought he was going to kill
him!!  So there was the action & scariness.  And the Frank & Rachel - well
that was all of it, and it was good.  They were fighting like usual, and I
loved that.  And then the heat!  Well I love all these stories with a bit
of fire in them!  It was very nice.  And all the ending bit was great,
especially the last line.

Message: 15   Date: Wed, 01 Dec 1999 17:16:37 +1100
  From: Jaye Reid <jayereid@xxxxxxx.xxx.xx>Subject: Feedback: Honeymoon Lovers
Hey Cammie and Julia
You already know how great I think this was.  I am so jealous that I didn't have
time to really work with you two on it.  I love the way you put in the bits we
discussed, and the whole ending was action packed and suspensful.  Was it Julia
who tried to damage the Frank and Rachel dolls again? <g>
The general Frank and Rachel banter was classical, the 'bad guy' nice and sleazy
and bad!Overall a brilliant co-written fic.
When can I come and play with you guys and the dolls?        (:            Jaye


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