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Julia & Cam - HONEYMOON LOVERS You guys seem to have a rather brilliant working partnership. This
was great - action & scariness, Frank & Rachel, and of course a bit of heat!! I tell you though,
the similarities between this and Sim's was decidedly freaky! I mean, I know great minds think alike,
but this was just weird! Anyway, *I* was ready to punch whatshisname's lights out, so I was worried
as to how Frank would be feeling, and then I thought he was going to kill him!! So there was the
action & scariness. And the Frank & Rachel - well that was all of it, and it was good. They were
fighting like usual, and I loved that. And then the heat! Well I love all these stories with a bit
of fire in them! It was very nice. And all the ending bit was great, especially the last line.
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Message: 15 Date: Wed, 01 Dec 1999 17:16:37 +1100 From: Jaye Reid <jayereid@xxxxxxx.xxx.xx>Subject:
Feedback: Honeymoon Lovers Hey Cammie and Julia You already know how great I think this was. I
am so jealous that I didn't have time to really work with you two on it. I love the way you put in
the bits we discussed, and the whole ending was action packed and suspensful. Was it Julia who
tried to damage the Frank and Rachel dolls again? <g> The general Frank and Rachel banter was classical,
the 'bad guy' nice and sleazy and bad!Overall a brilliant co-written fic. When can I come and play
with you guys and the dolls? (: Jaye
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