Crossroads Raves

Message: 3 Date: Sun, 05 Dec 1999 20:57:54 +1100
From: e s m e <erinwilson@xxxxx.xxx.xxxSubject: Re: Crossroads.
Okay this was brilliant. I loved it. I'm not sure what it was, but there
was just something about this one that made me go "wow"! The thoughts and
stuff worked in really well with the rest of it. The medical stuff all
seemed realistic, although I would have no idea about those sorts of
things. The way Rachel's thoughts were so scattered was good. I liked the
fact that Frank knew she was needing to face it all, that was like the ESP
thing. And the way he could tell that she was trying. Oh it was just so
good! I guess the Rachel doll came out alive, so that's a plus. You
certainly bashed her around mentally. Just as long as she survives! esme

Awwwwwwww. =)

Just when I thought you were gonna go all Queen Meanie on me and kill
Rachel, you bring Frank back and save her! That's awesome, I'm
really proud of you. Look, see, you don't really need to beat her up
so much - it's nicer if you bring Frank back and they live happily
ever after.

Aside from that, it was just a cool story. I liked Helen's reaction
when Rachel had the seizure, I could imagine her losing it like that.
And all the rats taking turns watching her was so sweet. Very nice :)

Vanessa