The Rebel
This is my adaption of "Rebel With A Cause" by Kim
Hansen.
Chapter 1
“Let me out.”
“Are you crazy?”
“Stop the car and let me out!” Brenda repeated hotly
and yanked on the handle. She had the door open before the green
Jaguar skidded to a halt, and was outside a second later.
“Your being childish!” the man inside snapped.
“Really?” She flung the door shut with as much force as
she could, muster, making the half-open window rattle. “And
your being a pompous...”
The squealing tires drowned out her retort and left her standing
in the middle of a deserted street, but she didn’t notice
her surroundings. Not until the Jaguar had disappeared around the
corner at the end of the block. It was only then, muttering under
her breath and turning from where the vehicle and its offensive
driver had gone, that Brenda swung to look for the nearest phone
booth or taxi...and felt her stomach sink.
Caught up in the heat of argument, she hadn’t paid any
attention to where she was or what was happening outside the car.
But the deed was done. She was out of the car, by herself, and
had absolutely no idea where she was.
Her teeth found her lower lip, and she slowly surveyed her
surroundings. Wherever she was, it wasn’t any place she had
been before, and it was far from her home in San Marino,
California.
No tree-lined drives or manicured lawns were in sight. No
ornamental lamps lit thewalks with a warm, welcoming glow. The
street she was standing on had only debris edging its curbs. And
the only illumination came from one streetlight posted high above
the cement that, she quickly noted, did little to eliminate the
eerie shadows cast along th empty porches, hollow doorways and
dark alleys flanking the road.
Unconsciously her tongue darted out to lick lips that had
suddenly gone dry. Nervously she began edging her way up the
street toward the avenue cutting across it at the corner. Surely
there she’d find a phone booth or a taxi...But it was hard
to concentrate on what might be ahead when he kept watching out
for what lay behind.
Black windows stared at her from scarred buildings, their panes
like hollow eyes watching her. The shadows hovering around stairs
and alleys seemed to shift constantly, following her with silent
intent. Yet the crackling and buzzing streetlight alarmed her the
most. It was as if, at any moment, its bulb would blow, plunging
her into darkness while surrounded by the menacing unknown. Her
heart skipped a beat, and she hurried on.
The last few steps to what she hoped was salvation were taken
quickly despite the three-inch heels she wore, but the hope that
had been building died when she found the avenue as barren and
unwelcoming as the street she had come from. No telephone booths
and no cabs were in sight.
Glancing down at her hands as her fingers wound together in
silent consternation, she smothered a groan. Even if she had
found a phone booth, using it would have been a problem. She’d
left her purse in the car!
Desperate, Brenda turned in a circle one more time but found
little to reassure...except she hadn’t been followed down
the street. She was alone. Nothing and no one stirred.
The sudden clang of metal against metal made her jump. It echoed
through the night with a hollow ring and had her whirling in
alarm to find its source. But a telephone pole and mailbox
blocked her view.
Taking an uneasy step to the side, Brenda held her breath and saw
a silhouette of a man bending over a motorcycle. Intent on what
he was doing he hadn’t noticed her. Yet.
She darted a quick glance at the diamond-studded watch on her
wrist. It was three o'clock on a Saturday morning, and it
appeared that she and he were the only ones out on the otherwise
silent road.
Looking around again at the street that was a far cry from the
smooth pavement and rolling green of Beverly Hills and Pasadena,
she suppressed the chill that threatened to shake her and bit her
lip once more. She would have felt better if she could have at
least seen a phone booth or a taxicab...both signs of escape...but
neither was in sight, and it didn’t seem likely she’d
find either nearby.
She took a deep breath. Her options appeared to be extremely
limited. Swallowing any trepidation, she prepared to introduce
herself to a complete stranger.
Chapter Two