"joe"-ken
blood on the corner of his, joe lies still .
wa waa
oh no, i just started
you hurt him. is he gonna have a scar
you do know how this ends
but
back to the story
JUMP TO HOSPITAL
it appears his heart has stopped beating...-dr. nanbu
c-what that would... chugar faints and then ken falls to the floor
resident nurse-their hearts just stopped
rocky-i don't get it. are they dead?
dr. nanbu- no their just unconcious
in a black room on the floor, joe opens his eyes. "where am i?"
joe hadn't awoken at all but was in another realm created by his mind.
dr. nanbu refused to let the doctors examine the three nor to disclose why they weren't brain dead. he soon made a call pleading "you may be able to help them."
back to joe
the room lit up and people were standing all around dressed in 15th century clothes. one more look around and joe realized he was in a ballroom.
"chugar"-j
standing in a corner she stood thinking to herself "i want to dance."
ah my lady, you look in need of a dance.-said a man who looked much like joe but in the same kind of style of clothing as every other man.
"wow she thought"sir, you've read my mind
stepping onto the floor as violins play a soft melody as they waltz.
why am i seeing this?joe asked himself . more seens flash before him so many different eventes they couldn't have happened in one life time.
ken, too, awoke in darkness. the first image seemed very strange"i remember that day"
chugar sitting at a table in a resturaunt in the 17th century(clothes not much different from that in the 15th century or more commonly shakespeares time). on the other side of the resturaunt joe and ken stood talking. ken stands and listens to joe and his twin. i aksed you here for her(gasing over at the chugar) i know she likes you and i have business in spain
how do
don't be shy just introduce yourself and ask to sit with her. DON'T tell her i left. tell her i'm... nothing."
uh do you really want to tell how he dumped us
it show how we are connected
oh... carry on
CUT TO CHUGAR
oh great my heart must have stopped too this must be the first time joe has "died"
FOR READERS: TO DIE IN CHUGAR'S DEFINITION MEANS TO BE OUT OF IT FOR 24 HOURS FOR THAT TIME THE HEART SLOWS TO 1 BEAT PER HOUR AN IMPOSSIBILITY TO MORTALS
mommy, mommy -little boy
she saw him running toward her duplicate wearing something that resembled "little house on the prairie". in fact, they were on a farm
look! their back!- little boy
two horses rode up. chugar remembered how ken and joe had went to town for two weeks. one hores had the supplies they needed to work the land.
the land was bought with what wealth chugar had which started long before she was a detective but it was only in the thousands in those days. the time was in the 19th century(1800's).
whose son was that little boy, ken's or joe's? he had dark red hair but chugar hair looked similar when the sun shined right. did she know? of course she was only with one of them for the last 11 years and the boy was only 10. it's like her #1 rule.
FOR READERS: RULE #1 BE A ONE MAN WOMAN OR A ONE WOMAN MAN (EXCEPT WITH CLONES).
BACK TO JOE
* note while writing this on paper i kept confusing the two names but don't worry i got it straightened out
huh chugar standing over stove when his copy walks up, puts his arms around her, and insist that she sit down. she turns around and joe notices that she is about 7 months pregenant( b/c chugar's pregnancy is faster she was about a month and a week). joe's copy soon has her seated when ken walks in.
"she's still running around like nothin'"-ken
i've been pregnant before i know the limits, there are none. -chugar speaking in a country accent
ken and joe look at each other and both say "why is she doing this to us"
it's not like you don't know who the father is and you still both are on me only one of you need say anything-chugar (that's right she don't pause for nothin')
well, i'm going to cook- replied joe
wow! he really loves us
interuptions are getttin me down. if you do it one more time you are gonna fry and then i'll make sure you free fall right
hmM-MM ladies stop fighting-joe
joe - both girls with hearts in their eyes *sigh*
chugar start talking really fast
slow down-joe
O..........kay *sigh*
back to the story
that was wonderful said chugar sitting back from the table
i don't believe this . is she in my head? trying to brain wash me?-joe
room goes dark
no this IS my life-said a voice from behind
he turned around. yet another copy. no scene this time just a light shining down upon them.
you must remember or you, ken and chugar will stay in this commatose state, reliving your life again and again.
BACK TO Ken(in my notes it says back to joe can you guess why?)
That farm was more of hastle than a bargain . i wonder what she did with it- ken
you guys are so quick to give up
us the science ninja team, never but in the old ... man i wonder what hap..."
room goes dark
you lied to me why
no i didn't- chugar
he looks nothing like me
are you so sure or are you trying to weasel out- chugar
"that's why" said ken "nothing was the same after that"
the conversation that turned best friends into rivals.
at the hospital elevator opens showing dr. nanbu on outside smiling beside the others who are staring
dr. nanbu pointing towards dark figure in elevator "this is jake"
the name seemed to ring in chugar's ears which slightly twitched.
she's walking towards man in tuxedo.
"jake, you are so in trouble"- chugar
"aren't i too old for spankings"-jake
you still have to answer to her. i still don't know why i agreed to break my rule for you. prove to me i didn't make a mistake- chugar
you are gaining a daughter-in-law don't worry
it's the "in-law" i worry about"
huh?
soon chugar's back in total darkness
BACK TO JOE(I HATE MY NOTES I GOT TO KEEP THEM RIGHT*HUFF*)
IN CHAPEL BATHROOM
nervous, don't be we'll be there soon
you don't have to worry about being lat your just a guest
ouch, i think your mom sees it differently
SKIP TO CHURCH CATHEDRAL
everyone seated and waiting for wedding to begin
man , can't you cut your hair once- ken
stop it, -_-everytime *huff*- chugar
tell ken we can take this outside-joe
i'll take you both on if you don't stop
both look at her in surprise i wouldn't want that
look at each other eyes squinched
BACK TO KEN
man we are so late
you are here don't worry
jake runs out of car
in all the wedding photos joe and ken are seen giving each other the mean eye while chugar is not look
(hear smiling faces song in background)
don't know the words? here's some:
smiling faces sometimes they don't tell the truth
back to real world
ken, joe and chugar's hospital beds surround jake so their heads are pointing towards him. he waves his hands over them.
will that really work
he's trying to reach them
BACK TO JOE
joe wake up, accept what you've seen
but that means giving up who i am
it's always hard at first bu four lifetimes would be wasted
alright he closes his eyes and takes a deep breath.
joe's eyes open *gasping* the air followed by ken and chugar.
jake-chugar wraps her arms around him - why haven't you called?
um-hmm, isn't there something you want to say- ken
do you have your memories- jake says looking at joe
sorta-joe
then you know jake... uh... how's the wife?-ken
great...- jake
i still need more time. it seemed like a movie of someone else's life and me as an actor playing the lead- joe
hmm, i got pictures , paintings, and even letters. why not go to my place? just you and me they'll...just be a distraction.
chugar winks at camera
fade out
the end
did you think it needs improvement? no i will not add any love scene if that's on your mind and chugar is my character her traits can not be changed. would you not want to be powerful, rich, sweet, and extremely talented.
if you have your own anime guy in mind for a fanfic tell me i'll see if i can do something. this is fiction give me some little bio with a summary of what you would like in a story or write one i may post it.(i will revise if content is not up to the pg 13 rating i'd like to let every girl read it)
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