Ah, the month of March. Right now, Fuu thinks there's a snow lion... this is the most snow she's had since the winter solstice. :p And in Latin, it's Kalendae Martius. And it's a Veneris. Whee, yay. Fuu loves her friend Elysa for giving Fuu her Latin calendar. ^^ On with the review!

SPLASH

What? You've moved? But I thought that the fly.to addresses were automatic forwarding things... you should've told us... :p

REAL SPLASH

Hm, this looks screwed up, the background wraps... oh, it's made for 800x600. :p Well too bad, Fuu isn't changing. She reviews grammar, anyway, and how the layout fits is of no concern to her.

INDEX

Ooh, Fuu likes the layout. It features HER! ^^ Fuu does believe it does her cute little face justice. ^^ Maybe if you made the links pink or yellow it would be EVEN BETTER! But... AGH! It has the evil Javascript scrollers! Hint: Fuu hates them. She can't skip to the bottom of the page or scroll at a faster speed or use her special scrolling thing on her laptop mouse. >p On the menu, "Multi" is a little misleading... maybe you want the latter half of the full word and not the former. :p Oh yeah, grammar. In the fifth sentence, insert a comma after "me." Wow, that's a lot of talk for just the main page! But at this rate, it will be a short review. *prays*

INFO

Hm, maybe you want to use an image map or smaller images instead of making the whole "row" a link? Just a thought. :p As for grammar, in the blurb about your flowcharts, make that "so" the end of the sentence and insert a comma before "obviously." :p

INFO - INTRODUCTION - MANGA

Ooh, Fuu just noticed that you don't have a bgcolor tag! Please, add one in. If the server is taking forever, the patrons won't be able to read the text. :p Hm, in the third sentence, end that sentence after "manga" and make the "sure, they have..." a new sentence. ^^ Artwork is one word. These colors are very flat because it's just green and white... really, pink or yellow would be GREAT. REALLY. Please? Of course, it's just Fuu's opinion, so ignore her. :p In the second paragraph, the "otherwise" somewhere in the middle should be changed to "or else." You don't need to talk about how long the story takes to start off. "Anyways" should really be "Anyway." Comma after "Fuu" in the last sentence. But that was pretty good! So far, you've got about a seven. :p

INFO - INTRODUCTION - ANIME

"Mashin" should be capitalized always... and hey, that's it!

INFO - INTRODUCTION - OAV

It should be "I don't think the OAV was exactly aimed..." Double-negative = positive. ^^; Capitalize Mashin. And in the last sentence of the second paragraph, "leading" doesn't work. Try "with" instead. ^^

INFO - FLOWCHART - STORY ONE

Right, "each other" is two words. ^^;; Remember to put periods at the ends of your sentences. :p The Knights escape on a gryffindor? Yes, and later they fight a Hufflepuff, a mysterious badger-like creature, and later a giant Ravenclaw picks up Umi and drags her away, only to have a Slytherin rescue her. ^^;; I think you mean griffon, in any case. Or griffin. Word says that they're both right. ^^;; Hm, Escudo is also a proper noun. You might want to specify if this is the anime storyline or the manga storyline, because later on they start to differ drastically. On the second page of this, in the Shrine of the Sea thing, "symbolism" should be "a symbol of." Windam does not tell Fuu to prove herself worthy of heart. He tells Fuu to prove that her heart is worthy. Under "Saving Emeraude," third bullet, "under" should be "against," "the combined attack" should be "their combined attack," and there should be a comma after "Spiral Lights." Under "Battle with Emeraude," in the second bullet, delete the "had."

INFO - THE LEGEND OF THE MAGIC KNIGHTS (explanation one)

Hm, no comma is needed after "basically." When using a quote inside a quote, you use single quotation marks (' and ') for the second quote. Very awkward to put it in the present tense. :p

INFO - PRINCESS EMERAUDE (explanation three - Fuu doesn't know where explanation two went ^^;;)

The comma in the first sentence should be a semicolon. The Pillar is not a "they"; the Pillar is a "he/she/it." It's confusing by saying "they," because "they" implies that the Magic Knights aren't doing their duty, when it's the Pillar. This is a recurring problem throughout the paragraph. Normally Fuu wouldn't be picky, but because of it, one can get the Pillar confused with the Knights. ^^;; People don't "become despaired," they just despair. Fuu has no idea what is up with the random period in the middle of the last sentence.

INFO - FLOWCHART - STORY TWO

It should be "their families begin," not "their family begins." Under Tokyo Tower, second bullet, "had" should be "have." Fuu thinks you mean that SOMEONE summons them, not summon summons them. ^^;;
It occurs to Fuu that maybe you should make the further explanations in pop-up windows. Of course, Fuu can't do pop-ups, but if you can, it would be cute if you put them in little pop-up windows. ^^;;
In "Cephiro's Palace," second time, first bullet, they seem to have CHANGED in appearance, not changes. Fourth bullet, delete the first "and." Under "NSX, Bravada, Dome," first bullet, the "to" needs two "o"s. Again, "each other" is two words (so it's not a typo...). In the last section on the first page, fourth bullet, "all of his pupils" should be "all of whom were his pupils." Last bullet, "quest" should be plural, and again, remember to capitalize Pillar. :p
On the first section, last bullet, "the such" should just be "such." "Hikaru passes through Autozam's path but goes unconscious" is hard to understand for anyone who hasn't seen the exact episode you're talking about. :p On the second "NSX, Bravada, Dome" on this page, second bullet, insert a "can't" between "she" and "become." In "Near Cephiro's Palace," when everybody's fighting, the Knights don't withdraw their swords. ^^;; They just draw them. In the second-last bullet in this section, "will" needs to be plural. Eagle will fall into a comma? Yes, and there's Lantis changing into an apostrophe, and Aska changing into a @ sign. ^^;; Fuu thinks you mean "coma," not comma. ^^;; In the thing about Umi and Fuu begging Mokona, you repeat "beg it" before and after the parentheses. ^^;; They also beg it to let them HAVE Hikaru. REMEMEBER TO CAPITALIZE PILLAR. The singular and plural of Mashin are the same - and CAPITALIZE IT! Again, Eagle's in a coma, not a comma. ^^;; (This presents the oddest picture for Fuu... Eagle captured within a literal comma ^^;;)

INFO - CEPHIRO'S CURRENT SITUATION (explanation four)

Second-last sentence, make sure to capitalize "Pillar." (just a typo :p) Oh, the link to go back goes to the wrong page. :p

INFO - MOKONA (explanation five)

Ah! You misspelled marshmallow! :p Hint: if you plan to insert a comma after a quote ending in an exclamation mark, you can't. Forget the comma. Insert a comma after "travel guide." In the last sentence of the first paragraph, insert a comma before "though."
God-Mokona would've descended to Cephiro, not ascended. In that same sentence, "Knight's" should be "Knights'." Actually, that's not a sentence standing on its own; it should be added on to the sentence preceding it via a comma. Wait... huh? Fuu thought you were explaining why God-Mokona came to Cephiro, and then you randomly say that's why the Pillar system was created. Fuu is confused. @_@

INFO - CHARACTERS - PROTAGONISTS

Uh... why do you have the "bad guys" listed here as well? It makes no sense. @_@ You also didn't link them to their character profiles.

INFO - CHARACTERS - PROTAGONISTS - HIKARU

Oki, Fuu finds this Javascript scrolling thing EXTREMELY FRUSTRATING!! GRRR!!! ^^;; Anyway, this is the oddest mix of anime and manga information... please specify from which you are taking the information. PLEASE. Hm, third sentence, insert a comma after "story" and after "swordswoman." Uh, last sentence of the first paragraph, the "in harm's way" should be deleted. :p Oh, and CAPITALIZE PILLAR!

INFO - CHARACTERS - PROTAGONISTS - UMI

"outgoing" is one word. In the second sentence, insert a "she" before "graces." Second paragraph, last sentence, that comma needs to become a period. Third paragraph, same problem in the third sentence. Remember to put a comma BEFORE "though" as well as after. And again, same problem in the fourth paragraph in the second sentence. And in the third sentence, insert commas after "home," "however," and "possible."

INFO - CHARACTERS - ANTAGONISTS - ZAGATO/ALCIONE/ASCOT

Zagato blurb, first paragraph, fourth sentence, remove the comma after "therefore." Last sentence, insert a comma after "Magic Knights." Second paragraph, insert a comma after "as well" in the first sentence. CAPITALIZE PILLAR. Second sentence, insert a comma before "but." Third sentence, insert a comma after "however." Alcione blurb, second sentence, insert a comma after "court." Fourth sentence, insert an "is" before "obsessed." Uh, second-last sentence is a little awkward with the anime v. manga thing. :p Fuu doesn't like Alcione either. :p Uh, Ascot's the only one who tries to stop the Knights in the Sea Shrine, though he IS the second minion overall. So clarify that. :p Second sentence, insert a comma after "summoner." Ah! You used the wrong version of "two"! >p Uh, last sentence, make "shows" into "show" and insert a comma after it. :p

INFO - CHARACTERS - ANTAGONISTS - CALDINA/LAFARGA/INOUVA

Be consistent with your spelling of Innouva. Fuu is not sure which spelling is correct (she personally prefers Innouva), but you should at least be consistent with what you pick. :p Oki, for Lafarga, you don't go chronologically. This is not recommended. You start talking about his past, then the first season, then back to the past again. It's confusing for anyone who hasn't seen those episodes. Second-last sentence here, remove the comma after "type," and in the last sentence, add a comma after "information."
Okay, you don't need the comma after "Inouva" in the first sentence. You may note that "Innouva" is also an okay spelling (mainly because Fuu uses it ^^). "He can be seen" would be better were it "He is seen." "Reveres Zagato with great respect" is redundant. Fix it. :p (this is getting long...) Last sentence, insert a comma after "real form."
You should clarify that Ascot, Caldina, Lafarga, the Fahren crew... okay, that everyone EXCEPT Zagato, Alcione, and Debonair don't STAY antagonists - everyone else "converts to the side of good." :p Fuu knows that you SAY this, but perhaps you could also link those people on the Protagonists page as well and not link Zagato, Alcione, and Debonair? Oh yeah, and Emeraude is an antagonist too. :p

INFO - CHARACTERS - ANTAGONISTS - EAGLE/GEO/ZAZU

Third sentence about Eagle, remove the comma. Fourth sentence, you have the wrong form of "it's" (forgot the apostrophe) and insert a comma after "high tech." Sixth sentence, remove the "is." Eighth sentence, make both commas either semicolons or colons (either works). At least you got the comma versus coma problem fixed. :p
Second sentence about Geo, insert a comma after "Zazu." Third sentence, insert a comma after "strong." Seventh sentence, make the comma a period and end the sentence.
As for Zazu, the mechas aren't really his. They're Eagle's and Geo's. :p Fourth sentence, insert a semicolon before "therefore." I didn't know Zazu had a sweet tooth. (It's an Attack Of Not Reading/Watching MKR In Months...)

INFO - CHARACTERS - ANTAGONISTS - TATRA/TARTA

Fourth sentence about Tatra, insert a comma after "appearance." Insert a "the" between "is" and "best." Djinn is misspelled.
Fifth sentence about Tarta, insert a comma after "inside." Sixth sentence, insert a comma after the first "Cephiro." Again, Djinn is misspelled.

INFO - CHARACTERS - ANTAGONISTS - ASKA/CHANNAN/SANYUN

Oki, first sentence, insert a semicolon before "however" and a comma after. Uh, rewrite the second sentence like this: "She intends to conquer Cephiro for childish reasons: she wants to turn it into a child's dreamland, full of candy and other sweets." Third sentence, make the first comma a colon. "Whatnot" is one word. Sixth sentence should be rewritten to "She decides that she doesn't and can't love Cephiro more than she loves Fahren, and since, to be Pillar, she must love Cephiro above all else, she decides not to pursue that position any more."
As for Channan, second sentence, insert a comma after "then." Last sentence, insert a comma after "longwinded."
Sanyun wasn't born IN the royal family (as opposed to "of"), and insert a comma after "royal family" in that sentence. "Carefree" is one word. You used the wrong version of "whose" in the last sentence.

INFO - CHARACTERS - ANTAGONISTS - NOVA/DEBONAIR

Second sentence about Nova, insert a comma after "fact." In sentence four, replace "overall" with... uh... well, "overall" just doesn't fit. :p Don't ask why. Sentence five, make the comma before "thus" a semicolon and add in a comma after. Nova has a Mashin, not a mecha. (Mecha indicates that it isn't alive, and Regalia is alive...) Last sentence, make the comma before "therefore" a semicolon.
Third sentence about Debonair, insert a comma after "nevertheless." Fifth sentence, make the first comma a period and insert a comma after "well."

INFO - SEIYUU

Blurb about Konami Yoshida, no period necessary after "info" in the parentheses. Be consistent with whether or not you include the Western sun sign or not. :p Although maybe the Chinese system would be more relevant. ^^;; Ogata Megumi is one of Fuu's favorite seiyuu. ^^ She voiced Yukito, Haruka, Eagle... it's all good. :p And in the blurb about her, make the comma in the first sentence a period. Blurb about Ferio's seiyuu make the comma in the blurb into a period. Ooh, Clef's seiyuu voiced Eriol? Fuu didn't know that! ^^; AH! SHINOHARA EMI VOICED KAHO! *heart* Fuu is learning so much! ^^ And Arashi? Yay! Oh, which Sailor Senshi did she voice? Sailor Senshi definitely qualify as important roles! Hm, if Zagato's seiyuu also voiced Lantis, say that on the main page. :p Again with the inconsistencies in spelling Innouva's name. :p Wow, Alcyone's seiyuu is very pretty. ^^ Oki, WHAT are these "three sizes"? Fuu is clueless. :p She voiced Tenchi? ^^;; Fuu loves Shiratori Yuri. ^^ And Hisakawa Aya. ^^ (Kero-chan!) The plural of anime is anime. :p Remember to capitalize Aluminum Siren (on Inoue Kikuko's page). It would be a good idea to combine some of these seiyuu profiles on pages to reduce the number of HTML files. (e.g., put Tarta and Tatra's seiyuu on the same page, etc.) Geo's seiyuu voices Tamiya... how fitting. ^^ Oh yes, birthplace is one word. On Windam's seiyuu's page, you misspell Windam. ^^;;

INFO - CLAMP

Fourth sentence in the blurb, insert a comma after "works of art" and after the last "and." I thought her name was Nanase, not Nanse. You forgot to put a "Back" link on this page. ^^;;

MULTI

Yikes... this review is on the fifth page already! X_x In the MP3 blurb, insert a comma after "MP3s."

MULTI - GALLERY

In the "Group" blurb, insert a comma after "character." Also, did you scan all these? Always give credit to the proper person - including yourself. ^^

MULTI - GALLERY - HIKARU

Use the height and width attributes in your img src things. It's a good idea. ^^ However, Fuu must say that there are no grammar mistakes. ^^

MULTI - GALLERY - UMI

Fuu likes how you do your thumbnails. ^^

MULTI - GALLERY - FUU

You have a broken "Back" link.

MULTI - GALLERY - OTHER INDIVIDUALS

Fuu thought this was the "Other Individuals" gallery, not "Cephiro Citizens." :p And the Back link is broken again.

MULTI - GALLERY - GROUP

It might be a good idea to separate into group pictures of the Knights and group pictures of others. And provide a link to get back to the main gallery page on each page.

MULTI - GALLERY - OAV

Uh, there's a double of a Clef thumbnail. ^^;; And again, broken Back link.

MULTI - MP3

In the first sentence of the blurb, make the second "to" an "of" and delete the "the" between "and" and "such." Yuck, Fuu hates Myplay. :p

MULTI - LYRICS - J-SHIFT

And yes, this Japanese make TONS of sense to the Japanese-impaired Fuu.

MULTI - LYRICS - ROMANIZED

See above. :p

MULTI - WALLPAPER

Oh, that's okay. ^^ Free web hosting servers are out to get us all. (Fuu's Crosswinds account just went poof and she has to move her whole damn site to another server...) Plus, it's evidence that you've updated recently.

FAN

Third sentence, insert a comma after "moment." The plural of "fan fiction" is "fanfiction." Last sentence of the first paragraph, insert a comma after "Golden Dream." Uh, the first sentence of the second paragraph makes it sound like it's a GOOD thing that one forgets the information. ^^;; Second sentence, you forgot the "want" between "don't" and "credit." And put a comma in after "name" in that sentence.

MISC

Life is good.

MISC - MY OPINION

Last sentence of second paragraph, insert a comma after "dramatic." First sentence of the third paragraph, make the comma a semicolon/period and insert a comma after "greatest." Hey, Fuu started off with Sailormoon! >p Third-last sentence, insert a comma after "better." Last sentence, insert a comma before "so obviously."

MISC - AWARDS

Please use the height and width attributes! Please? And the Javascript scrolly is a pain in the ass on pages with images, because Fuu can't even start scrolling until the whole page is done loading. >p *must... resist... urge... to... correct... grammar... on... awards...*

MISC - WIN AWARDS

Fifth sentence, insert a comma after "First of all" and make the period at the end of that sentence a comma.

MISC - POLLS

Broken link. :p

SITE

Insert a comma after "a little late" in the Updates blurb, and insert a comma after "contributions" in the Contact blurb.

SITE - LINK IN

Fourth sentence, insert a comma after "below." Oh yay, you linked us! ^^

SITE - UPDATES

Oh my... you update so much... *feels guilty now*

SITE - ABOUT

Uh, first sentence, insert a comma after "words." Insert a comma after the parentheses in the second sentence. One makes a site about something, not to something. Last sentence in the History blurb, insert a comma after "you."
Third sentence of the Layout blurb, insert a period after "pretty nice."

OVERALL

Yikes... seven pages worth of review! ^^;; But that's okay because this was a big site. ^^ Overall problems would include a lack of commas in places where they were needed and using commas in places where a sentence should end. Also, CAPITALIZE "PILLAR" AND "MASHIN"! Fuu thinks you should add some yellow to the layout. ^^ (but that's just her...) There's a couple of broken links here and there - pretty normal, nothing huge. ^^ Fuu probably missed some comma corrections, but there were a lot. :p But hey, not too bad! Seven out of ten -- be proud!