Splash

Ooh, the picture of Nova is spiffy. (Ack, too much Run Spot Run!) She looks all dark and evil and stuff. ^^

Main

Yep, that's a simple layout. But the font on the menu at the bottom looks REALLY cool. Oh, know what would look even more cool? If you moved the text to the area to the left of the menu. And is the background purple or blue? On the bottom it's purple, but on the top it's blue... ^^;; Mmm, first couple sentences are a bit redundant with the "series two" thing. Oh yes, always spell out numbers 1-10. Insert a comma before the "such as." Web section? Maybe you mean Site? Or is it a sub-section... *shrug*

MKR

Hey, Mizuno! Yes, you, owner of Golden Dream! You reading this? Good. See how she did the scrollbar? That's a GREAT way of hiding the scrollbar. Way better than the #*@$ Javascript scrollers... oops, pardon Fuu's language. *blush* Uh, it's A magical land called Cephiro, not THE. Minor thing, that is. In the first series summary, there's a typo of "the" in the middle there (about Clef). Insert a comma after the first "Zagato." How about just "grow powerful" instead of "grow to become powerful"? Fuu would explain why that's wrong, but it's too hard. ^^;; In the spoiler warning, maybe insert "season" after "second" to clarify? The "at first" is a bit misleading... makes it sound like when they first got back to Tokyo, they were happy. They weren't, of course. Maybe say "Before they killed Princess Emeraude..."? This is a LOT of br breaks... you can do without some of them. :p GOOD grammar and spelling, dernit! So far I'm thinking a nine...

Nova

Fuu thinks you should make the non-visited/active/hover links blue as well, just to be consistent. :p And you have REALLY good spelling. (Fuu can never remember how to spell "elfish"... looks like "el fish" to her. :p)

Nova -- Story

And Fuu now knows the secret to listening to American pop music! It is this: DON'T ACTUALLY LISTEN TO THE LYRICS. Fuu just noticed that Shakira talks about... er... well, she won't say WHAT, but it... yeah. Just DON'T ACTUALLY LISTEN TO THE LYRICS. ^^ Hm, start of the spoiler, it sounds like NOVA killed Emeraude. Of course, this didn't happen. ^^;; Just change the "she" to "Hikaru" and the problem is solved. ^^ Ooh, "aggravation" is misspelled... but that's okay, Fuu can't spell it either. (Fuu knew "aggrevation" wasn't right, but she thought "aggrivation" was right... *sweatdrop*) Uh, third sentence of the spoiler, delete the "because of it." It's confusing. ^^;;

Nova -- General

Y'know, the little "back" links really aren't necessary... oh well, doesn't matter. :p The asterix is placed oddly... maybe at the bottom of the page? Fuu had to look for it, hidden where it was. :P Uh, stick to the present tense? There's a typo of the word "first." Insert a comma after "closer." Ooh, tidbit about Nova's name -- it means "new" in Latin. (Hah! Fuu knew that class would come in handy some day... *huge sweatdrop*)

Nova -- Why

Insert a comma after "bad guy" in the eighth sentence. You forgot the period at the end of the ninth sentence. You don't need the comma in the tenth sentence. Very good. ^^

Attack

Uh, sentence about her ability to become transparent, delete the comma. The "*spoiler*" thing seems really awkward, especially since the "Inazuma Shuurai" thing sort of gives it away... maybe make that whole sentence a spoiler? In the last sentence about her magic, delete the comma. And those parentheses are awfully confusing... two different alternate dimensions? Maybe "an alternate dimension"? And Fuu thought Nova could teleport anywhere, any time... oh well, Fuu doesn't remember that very well anyway... Oh, you missed the capitalization of "Magic" in the first sentence about Ceville and Alber.

People

Looks good.

People -- Hikaru

In the stats, capitalize "spicy." And be consistent with whether or not you capitalize the stats (e.g. "Favorite Food:" v. "Favorite food:").

People -- Lantis

Delete the comma in the first sentence of the spoiler. Be consistent with your spelling of "Cephiro"... either is correct, but consistency is good. :p Uh... I'm sure there's somewhere you can find more info on his name... try The Place Where Your Will Determines Everything.

People -- Debonair

Oh dear... that last sentence makes NO sense. Fix?

Multimedia

It's all good.

Multimedia -- Images

Uh.... there's no text here... so A+! (Image galleries are Fuu's favorite things to check for grammar.)

Multimedia -- Sounds

Nova's English voice actress is really quite good. ^^ Fuu wonders how annoying it must be to do the spaces between the letters in the links...

Multimedia -- Fan Related

Hm... Fuu doesn't think you hyphenate "fanart" or "fanfiction." But hey, they're probably un-official, so it doesn't matter. ;p

Site

Uh... you can delete the sole comma on this page. :p

Site -- Link In/Out

Oh goodie, you linked us. ^^ Um, and you don't need the comma after "Just."

Contact

... Fiendish Turtle? Ooooooooooooookay...

Overall

Let Fuu just say this: YOU ARE GOOD. Seriously! That was THE shortest review Fuu has EVER done. Forty minutes. FORTY MINUTES! You are a GOD(DESS). Forty minutes is like... is like... finishing your finals in ten minutes. That's what it's like. Sleep! SLEEP! Ooh, Fuu's fuzzy pajamas call to her. The only overall problem was knowing when NOT to include a comma in sentences that may LOOK like compound sentences but are really just long ones in disguise. (Like that one right there. Notice that, if you split it at the "but," "are really just long ones in disguise" has no subject, and thus cannot stand on its own as a sentence.) Fuu thinks this occured... five times, maybe? Whatever, she's sleepy. This is probably worth... oh, 8 out of ten, but just for that picture of Nova in the layout, it's a nine out of ten.