Stellar Review of The Rose Shrine
Sailor Celestial:
Okay now this page has my vote! Talk about hunks, here he is
folks the MAN!
Sailor Cirrus: Can you please
not drool on the keyboard, thank you.
Sailor Vortex:
Lets see such a pretty design, however grammar problems in
the first paragraph take away from that.
Sailor
Andromeda: Yeah, the first sentence I am having problems with, I
get the meaning but it should be cleaned up.
Sailor Nova:
Spelling errors
minor, and I dont know if normal is
the correct word for that sentence.
Quasar: And
who is Rick Hunter?
Sailor Cirrus: Dunno, but that
is not the point dummy.
Sailor Vortex:
onto the first link, Mamorus past life. Not broken, brownie
points!
Sailor
Celestial: What a pretty, pretty picture!! I like that quote, it
certainly fits.
Sailor
Andromeda: Once again some grammar and flow problems, not too
much of a distraction though, I like the story its told
really well.
Sailor Nova: Now
to his present
Once again gorgeously picked pictures with
wonderful quotes.
Sailor Cirrus: yeah Ill
check those out once I get done with this print
.it keeps
going and going
and going
..I lost the top of the
page!!!
Sailor
Celestial: He archived?
Sailor Vortex:
Hun, I think he means arrived
Sailor
Andromeda: I didnt know Suicides was a verb, isnt it
supposed to be commits suicide?
Sailor Nova:
yeah that would be more of those grammar mistakes.
Sailor Cirrus: whoa dude, who
would have ever guessed, his future is after his present.
Sailor Vortex:
The pictures have been constantly beautiful.
Sailor
Celestial: AWWWW that quote is soooo sweet!
Sailor
Andromeda: Who wrote these quotes???
Sailor Cirrus: I am assuming the creator.
Quasar: Duh,
Cirrus, I kind of figured that.
Sailor Cirrus: I hate
you
I really do.
Sailor Nova:
The tense keeps changing on me
okay Im lost, I have to
start at the beginning.
Sailor Vortex:
This part about Greek Mythology seems like it should be somewhere
else, its nice to know, but doesnt go in with the rest of
the little writing here, its about Myth while the rest of it is
about the Anime and Manga.
Sailor Celestial:
As a hero
ooh
littletime! Thats a new word for
me! Littletime!!
Sailor Nova:
Okay thats enough of that
we know there are grammar
and spelling errors.
Sailor Vortex:
I think this quote is supposed to be from Sailor Moons
perspective
at least I hope it is.
Sailor Cirrus: ill, I thought
he died
*scrambles for her Manga * or was that with the
animates?
Quasar: just
forget it, your sailor moon info could fill a small crack in the
ground.
Sailor
Andromeda: Oh cut it out already!
Sailor Nova:
He does appear as Endymion but
doesnt
agh
confused * falls over*
Sailor Cirrus: Is it just me
or is he brainwashed allot?
Sailor
Celestial: Maybe I could brainwash him
.^_^
Sailor Vortex:
This page has no quote, this is new.
Sailor
Andromeda: This page is just about his future self again, King
Endymion.
Sailor
Celestial: I have some dejavu going on.
Sailor Nova:
At least the design is constant!
Sailor Vortex:
This is true, once again I think this quote is an Usagi quote.
Sailor Cirrus: That appears to be
it.
Sailor
Celestial: Well aside from grammar errors, which makes the
reading a little jumpy.
Sailor Cirrus: And that one
HUGE column of writing.
Sailor Vortex:
I would say this gets the exceptional design award.