Stellar Review of The Rose Shrine

 

Sailor Celestial: Okay now this page has my vote! Talk about hunks, here he is folks the MAN!
Sailor Cirrus: Can you please not drool on the keyboard, thank you.
Sailor Vortex: Let’s see such a pretty design, however grammar problems in the first paragraph take away from that.
Sailor Andromeda: Yeah, the first sentence I am having problems with, I get the meaning but it should be cleaned up.
Sailor Nova: Spelling errors…minor, and I don’t know if normal is the correct word for that sentence.
Quasar: And who is Rick Hunter?
Sailor Cirrus: Dunno, but that is not the point dummy.

Sailor Vortex: onto the first link, Mamoru’s past life. Not broken, brownie points!
Sailor Celestial: What a pretty, pretty picture!! I like that quote, it certainly fits.
Sailor Andromeda: Once again some grammar and flow problems, not too much of a distraction though, I like the story it’s told really well.

Sailor Nova: Now to his present…Once again gorgeously picked pictures with wonderful quotes.
Sailor Cirrus: yeah I’ll check those out once I get done with this print….it keeps going and going…and going…..I lost the top of the page!!!
Sailor Celestial: He archived?
Sailor Vortex: Hun, I think he means arrived…
Sailor Andromeda: I didn’t know Suicides was a verb, isn’t it supposed to be commits suicide?
Sailor Nova: yeah that would be more of those grammar mistakes.

Sailor Cirrus: whoa dude, who would have ever guessed, his future is after his present.
Sailor Vortex: The pictures have been constantly beautiful.
Sailor Celestial: AWWWW that quote is soooo sweet!
Sailor Andromeda: Who wrote these quotes???
Sailor Cirrus: I am assuming the creator.
Quasar: Duh, Cirrus, I kind of figured that.
Sailor Cirrus: I hate you…I really do.
Sailor Nova: The tense keeps changing on me…okay I’m lost, I have to start at the beginning.
Sailor Vortex: This part about Greek Mythology seems like it should be somewhere else, its nice to know, but doesn’t go in with the rest of the little writing here, its about Myth while the rest of it is about the Anime and Manga.

Sailor Celestial: As a hero…ooh…littletime! That’s a new word for me! Littletime!!
Sailor Nova: Okay that’s enough of that…we know there are grammar and spelling errors.
Sailor Vortex: I think this quote is supposed to be from Sailor Moon’s perspective…at least I hope it is.
Sailor Cirrus: ill, I thought he died…*scrambles for her Manga * or was that with the animates?
Quasar: just forget it, your sailor moon info could fill a small crack in the ground.
Sailor Andromeda: Oh cut it out already!
Sailor Nova: He does appear as Endymion but doesn’t…agh…confused * falls over*
Sailor Cirrus: Is it just me or is he brainwashed allot?
Sailor Celestial: Maybe I could brainwash him….^_^
Sailor Vortex: This page has no quote, this is new.
Sailor Andromeda: This page is just about his future self again, King Endymion.
Sailor Celestial: I have some dejavu going on.
Sailor Nova: At least the design is constant!
Sailor Vortex: This is true, once again I think this quote is an Usagi quote.

Sailor Cirrus: That appears to be it.
Sailor Celestial: Well aside from grammar errors, which makes the reading a little jumpy.
Sailor Cirrus: And that one HUGE column of writing.
Sailor Vortex: I would say this gets the exceptional design award.

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