Paradise Found

by Padawan's Pet (padawan64@mindspring.com)



Archive: M_A, any others please ask

Rating: Very NC-17

Category: totally PWP

Summary: Qui-Gon introduces Obi-Wan to the joys of scented massage oil...much to the Padawan's delight! This is the second part of the Keeper's challenge.

Spoilers: None....takes place around the time of TPM

Warnings: Just total mindless smut between our boys (hey, with "oil", what else could it be?)

Feedback: Yes, please! This is only the second fic I have EVER written, so PLEASE be kind!

Disclaimers: Just borrowing these two from Mr. Lucas, no copyright infringement intended here.

Special thanks to My Master, Amber, for all her assistance and her infinite patience with her Padawan. bowing respectfully

Special thanks also to Wolfsbride for all her guidance and suggestions, and her never-ending confidence in me. waves gratefully



Obi-Wan could sense it. He could sense those piercing blue eyes fixed on him, demanding his attention.

Sprawled out along the floor, dressed only in his sleep pants, Obi-Wan had been reading quietly, his fingers toying absently with his padawan braid.

Now, looking away from the book he was so intently reading, Obi-Wan felt a shiver course through him as his eyes fell upon the source of that demanding gaze.

Qui-Gon was standing before him, sleep pants hanging loosely about his hips, his hair loose and free from the leather tie, silvery brown strands draping gracefully over his strong shoulders.

Obi-Wan's eyes moved slowly over the breathtakingly beautiful body of his beloved Master, drinking in every luscious inch of his well-muscled form, until they met the fiery gaze that had been insistently bearing down on him.

In those beautiful indigo eyes, Obi-Wan saw the unmistakable fire of pure lust and deepest desire.

He could simply drown in those eyes.....lose himself forever in them. I could die a happy man, he thought, if those eyes were the very last thing I was able to see before I left this life.

A slightly wicked smile began to form on Qui-Gon's lips. He extended one of those beautiful, large hands, palm open, to Obi-Wan, his eyes never leaving those of his beloved apprentice.

For a moment, there was complete silence. Then came the mental command...three simple words spoken with such desire that it sent fire raging to Obi-Wan's groin, awakening his arousal.

//Come, my love//

Obi-Wan's heart pounded in utter anticipation as he reached out for his Master's hand. As he stood, his eyes never leaving his Master's, Obi-Wan felt himself being drawn slowly into the bedchamber.

Qui-Gon said nothing; he simply kept his gaze fixed on his apprentice as he led him over to the waiting bed. He drew nearer to Obi-Wan, closing in on the space that separated them, standing only inches away from his beloved Padawan.

He lightly caressed Obi-Wan's cheek, stroking it gently, lovingly. The touch of his Master's hand to his face sent a shiver coursing through Obi-Wan's body, and he leaned in against that caress, savoring the feel of his Master's loving touch.

Qui-Gon took his Padawan's braid between his thumb and finger, running his fingers sensuously up and down the length of it. He then wrapped the braid around his fingers and tugged gently, bringing his lover nearer, diminishing what little space remained between them.

Anticipating the touch of his Master's lips to his, Obi-Wan closed his eyes, lips parting slightly, wanting, needing.......waiting.......it seemed like an eternity of waiting, until he at last felt the sensation of tender lips brushing ever so lightly against his own, teasing him, causing Obi-Wan to groan in protest, wanting more, needing more. Obi-Wan felt the silky touch of his Master's tongue teasing his lower lip, tracing it, then sucking it gently, a low moan escaping from deep inside Obi-Wan's throat.

Qui-Gon released his hold on Obi-Wan's lip, pulling back from him, smiling wickedly, eyes emblazoned with lust.

"Stay here", the Jedi Master commanded, "do not move."

He left the room, leaving Obi-Wan standing, breathing heavily, eagerly awaiting his Master's return, overcome with frustration and desire, his arousal now fully awakened, his body craving release.

Qui-Gon returned momentarily, walking towards his lover with one hand hidden behind his back. Obi-Wan looked at him inquisitively, curious to see just what his Master was hiding from him.

Qui-Gon brought his concealed hand into view, and in it was a small crystal bottle filled with an amber fluid.

A zinging pleasure raced through Obi-Wan, excitement and anticipation showing on his beautiful face.

Then came the command...//Remove your clothing, my love//

Feeling his arousal deepening, Obi-Wan slowly untied the drawstring of the sleep pants he was wearing, feeling them slide softly down his legs, dropping to the floor, his eyes fixed on those of his Master. The coolness of the air teased lightly at his now throbbing erection, sending a sensation of pure pleasure throughout his body.

Taking his lover's hand, Qui-Gon led him to the edge of the bed. He put both hands on his apprentice's shoulders, pushing him gently down onto the soft mattress. Obi-Wan looked up at his Master with stormy blue-grey eyes that were filled with such need and desire, that the sight of those eyes sent a burning flame of arousal rushing straight to Qui-Gon's groin.

Qui-Gon bent down and gently cupped his apprentice's cheek in his hand, then whispered softly into his lover's ear.

"Turn over, beloved."

Obi-Wan, heart pounding madly against his ribs, obeyed his Master's command, and rolled over onto his stomach, gasping at the sensation of his now angry erection pressed against the coolness of the bedding beneath him.

Qui-Gon stood back, admiring the beautiful lines and curves of his Padawan's form. He sighed, thinking of how he could stand there for an eternity, gazing in wonder at his lover's beauty.

Obi-Wan began to writhe in anticipation, his body aching to be touched. He felt he would simply go mad if he were forced to wait another moment longer to feel those large, strong hands on him.

Qui-Gon knelt down onto the mattress, directly behind Obi-Wan, gently pushing his apprentice's legs apart, fingers lightly caressing the strong thighs, causing Obi-Wan to moan softly. His fingers traveled slowly along the lines of his lover's taut buttocks, tracing the delicate curves, and he leaned forward to press a tender kiss onto the small of Obi-Wan's back.

Obi-Wan began to moan louder at the touch of those lips to his flesh, hips grinding into the soft mattress beneath him, his body crying out for release.

He heard a small popping sound as Qui-Gon removed the cap from the crystal bottle he was holding. He became overwhelmed with excitement and anticipation as he began to realize just how delicious this was going to be.

Leaning over Obi-Wan, tipping the bottle slightly, Qui-Gon watched the silky threads of the amber oil seep out of the bottle and onto his apprentice's shoulders with a sensual, languid thickness.

Obi-Wan gasped at the touch of the oil to his flesh, and his nostrils caught the unmistakable scent of musk, intoxicating him as he inhaled deeply the enticing aroma.

Qui-Gon watched hungrily as the long line of amber oil slowly made its way down the lean, sensuous lines of his apprentice's form, sliding seductively down his back, causing the young man to moan deeply as it drew nearer and nearer to the cleft of his tightly muscled buttocks.

Obi-Wan gasped and moaned as the gleaming droplet of amber oil finally reached his most intimate of places, lightly coating the opening, preparing him for the sensation he most longed for, the sensation of his lover filling him, claiming him, further sealing their lover's bond, their bodies becoming connected by love, desire, and passion.

He writhed beneath Qui-Gon, whimpering, pleading silently for his beloved Master to take him quickly, passionately.

//Oh, Master, please....I need you inside me, now, ohhhh, please......//

//Patience, my beloved...//

Obi-Wan became aware once more of the angry erection throbbing against his stomach, pressing into the soft bedding, his body a jangle of nerve endings numbed by overwhelming sensation, his whole being a screaming, demanding mass of want and need.

Qui-Gon leaned back on his heels, and tilted the crystal bottle over his strong, muscled chest, delighting in the sensation of the gleaming amber oil drizzling downwards, slowly blazing a trail, trickling lightly over hardened nipples and continuing down over his taut abdomen, dipping into his navel, and running down to the base of his erection. Tiny drops of oil glistened in the surrounding nest of hair.

Placing the crystal bottle aside, Qui-Gon leaned over and pressed his chest against his apprentice's oil-slicked back, and began to slide his body back and forth in an erotic motion, causing Obi-Wan to moan loudly, arching his lower body up against his Master's stomach, feeling the delicious sensation of his Master's erection sliding back and forth along the cleft of his buttocks.

On and on they continued with their erotic rhythm, Qui-Gon moving back and forth over his lover's slicked form, Obi-Wan arching up into Qui-Gon's stomach, loving the sensation of his Master's hardness against him, teasing him, then lowering his hips, pressing them into the soft bedding beneath.

The heated scent of musk permeated the room, the air becoming heavy with the aroma of oil mingling with the sweat from their heated bodies.

Qui-Gon reached down between his apprentice's legs, and Obi-Wan groaned, lifting his lower body away from the bedding, allowing his Master's hand to find what it was seeking. Qui-Gon's hand wrapped around his lover's cock, squeezing it gently, causing Obi-Wan to gasp suddenly.

"Master.....please....yes....oh!"

Obi-Wan began thrusting into his Master's palm, pumping wildly, desperate for release. Qui-Gon suddenly released his grip on Obi-Wan, causing the young man to cry out in protest.

"Patience, my Obi-Wan,", Qui-Gon whispered, and leaning back, began to spread the glistening oil that was covering his body, working it down over the length of his shaft.

Please, Master, I must.....I want........//

What is it you want, tell me, my Obi-Wan//

"I want you inside me, now, please... TAKE ME!", Obi-Wan cried out in utter frustration.

"Yes, my beloved."

Qui-Gon pressed the tip of his erection at the oil-slicked entrance of his lover's body. With a hissing intake of breath, Obi-Wan again arched his back, pressing his lower body upwards, wanting.....needing. As Qui-Gon entered him, Obi-Wan threw his head back, crying out in sheer pleasure.

"Ohhhh, Master, yes....yes....YES.....PLEASE!"

The sound of his lover's cries of pleasure ignited the Jedi Master's passion with a frenzy that overtook him instantly. He began thrusting deeply, rapidly, his fingers tightly grasping his lover's hips, nails digging into the soft flesh.

Obi-Wan pushed back into those delicious thrusts, needing to take his lover in deeper, wanting to become one with his beloved Master, to feel their bodies meld into one being.

Qui-Gon pulled his apprentice's hips back against his taut stomach, wrapping one arm around Obi-Wan's waist, the other around his pulsing erection, stroking him urgently, and angled his thrusts upward, touching the sensitive gland within his lover's body.

This sent Obi-Wan into a frenzy of need, his erection throbbing madly, teetering on the brink of orgasm as he pumped wildly into his Master's hand, laying his head back against that strong shoulder, eyelids fluttering, his lips parted and swollen with lust, gasping for breath, reaching out for the release that was just beyond his reach.

He could feel Qui-Gon swelling within him, felt his Master's body begin to tremble with the impending orgasm. Qui-Gon gave one more hard thrust, stroking the sensitive prostate deep inside his lover, and Obi-Wan felt the familiar fire rush to his groin, and felt his body tighten and convulse, sending him spiraling towards ecstasy.

Screaming his lover's name, Obi-Wan came violently, pearly strands of hot seed spilling out into his Master's hand and onto the bedding beneath him.

His release was all that was needed to send Qui-Gon over the edge, and he too came hard, thrusting madly, tightening his grip around his lover's waist, as he spilled his seed deep inside his lover.

For a moment, the two men remained locked together, both gasping for breath, struggling to recover from the intensity of their orgasm. Obi-Wan's knees buckled underneath him, and he fell forward into the soft bedding, his Master falling with him.

Qui-Gon rolled over to one side, pulling his lover close, his strong arms wrapped around Obi-Wan, holding him, possessively.

You are mine, beloved//

Yes, Master, I am yours...now and forever//

Qui-Gon smiled, nuzzling the back of his Padawan's dampened hair, the ponytail tickling his nose playfully. He began to press soft, delicate kisses along the back of Obi-Wan's neck, hearing him purr with delight.

Yes......forever was just what he had in mind.



~end~



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