Our Fathers' Commandment

by Richard Fein


I was the Indian or maybe the cowboy.
The new Firestone tires were stacked like mountains.
The aisles stretched like paths in a desert
and everywhere was the smell of rubber.
Both our dads were by the store counter,
while I held my newfound friend's pistol.
The battle was bloody.
We both died many times,
and the stench of phantom gun smoke
overwhelmed the redolence of rubber.

Then the big glass door opened
and another boy came in with his dad.
But his hands were like claws.
I never saw such hands;
awe and panic flashed across my friend's face.
Then from both our fathers came a whispered command,
stern whispers
---don't stare---

And we fled to the canyons of tires
so as to obey our fathers.
But we peeked out
and saw the newcomer's face.
The tires blocked the forbidden sight,
so we were still keeping our fathers' law.
But then he raised his arms to his face,
and in those claws he clutched the pistol I had dropped.
His eyes longingly searched the badlands for the cowboy battles
he knew were being fought.
But we fought them no longer.

We hid our eyes so as not to stare.
And we were silent and still,
maintaining our cowering innocence,
never asking for the pistol back,
keeping the law of our fathers
between the pillars of Firestones.

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