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10/23/98 08:59:24
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02/04/98 23:53:02
| Comments: Some great work here John, I must have liked it as I read the whole thing in one sitting!!, well, other than stopping for dinner :).... You have obviously put a lot of hard work into this script and it shows. I don't really have any critisisms, except, we l, the three businessmen, the thought of them being involved with some 'cult' secret religious order was maybe abit..mmmm....hard to comprehend?, I found myself asking 'why', and more to the point 'how'?, I would be more comfortable seeing them as the (st ryotipical) 'private industry Bio-weapons magnate looking for the ultimate weapon' type scenario, yes,yes, I know its an old line, one thats been used before, and I know you cancelled that angle in the script .....but its worked before,.. Anyway, I loved it and can't wait for the re-write. Have you considered submitting this work in 'book' format to a publisher? It would need to have a 'catch' and the 'catch' could be "written with the help of 922 internet surfers",(your counter) with a l ttle work you could do a William Shatner(ie.write the next Star Trek film, only to have it snubbed by Fox, and just get it published)...anyway..bloody good luck to you..whatever you decide.....:) |
Thanks for the positive response, I'm starting to feel like this is no longer an uphill struggle. I agree with you about the business-men and as of the re-write they are dead. I have in fact done something highly original for an alien films, the governmen
want to get rid of the aliens! Wahey! As to the book thing, hmmm. I'm not really sure. I most certainly don't want to be associated with slaphead Shatner, but thanks for the suggestions.
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