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SHAKESPEARE’S SONNETS

            "Assist me some extemporal god of rhyme, for I am sure I shall turn sonneter. Devise, wit, write, pen; for I am for whole volumes in folio."
William Shakespeare - "Loves Labours Lost"

The English Sonnet is a poem form consisting of 14 lines, each with ten stressed and unstressed syllables known as iambic pentameter, with a set rhyme scheme of: a b a b c d c d e f e f g g. The rhymes may be ear-rhymes or eye-rhymes: an ear-rhyme is one that rhymes in sound, e.g. “increase” and “decrease”; an eye-rhyme is one that rhymes by sight, e.g. “compare” and “are”. This rhyme sequence sets the usual structure of the sonnet as three quatrains (sets of four lines) concluding with 1 couplet (a pair of lines). It is usual for there to be a pause for thought in the sonnet’s message at the end of each quatrain, especially the 2nd, in order to add tension, with the sonnet resolving to its objective in the final couplet, just as a song normally resolves to its root chord at its close. To convey the sense of resolution and completeness at the end of the sonnet there are often key-words, or tie-words, present in the closing couplet that are also present in the earlier quatrains. This structuring provides a framework on which to build the words, phrases, themes, rhymes, syncopation, punctuation and rhythm of the sonnet making it, at its best, a self-contained work of art.

Having established this structure though, the author can then go on to breach the framework to add tension and meaning: a quatrain will not necessarily comprise a full sentence - instead a quatrain may contain more than one sentence or a sentence may straddle more than one quatrain, sometimes extending across the whole sonnet giving a breathlessness to the sonnet. Sentences may end mid-line adding tension and dysfunction to complement the message of the sonnet. Key-words may be deliberately absent from certain quatrains where they don’t belong with the sentiments of that particular quatrain, emphasising the meaning the author wishes to convey by literally being absent. In this way, the sonnet can convey meaning and mood via compliance with the standard sonnet structure, or by deliberately venturing outside of that framework, depending on the effect required.

The sonnet was introduced to England by Sir Thomas Wyatt (1503-42) following his various European diplomatic positions, including Italy, in the court of Henry VIII. The form was then developed by Henry Surrey (1517-47) and became very popular with several Elizabethan sonneteers, particularly during the 1590’s, among them Shakespeare.

The sonnet form pre-dates this period by over 200 years though with Petrarch being its pre-eminent exponent. Petrarch centred his sonnets on a series of themes comprising: Love, Chastity, Death, Fame, Time and Eternity and it is clear that these themes were used by Elizabethan sonneteers as the model for many examples of their works. Shakespeare especially wrote many sonnets that have the Petrarchan themes of Time and Death at their centre and he even goes so far as to spoof Petrarchan sentiments in Sonnet 130. Equally, in this “Golden Age” of the English Renaissance, poets were inspired and influenced by their peers’ works and there are evident examples of close correlation such as between some of Constable’s and Shakespeare’s sonnets. Many of the sonnets are clearly personal but some may have been written on behalf of other people as part of a commission. It is important to bear all these extraneous factors in mind when looking for autobiographical clues in the works.

Shakespeare’s sonnets are known to have been circulated amongst “his private friends” and sent to his patron before a collection of 154 were published in the 1609 Quarto. It is not known whether the 1609 publication comprises all the sonnets he wrote. The sequence in which they were published is not necessarily completely chronological and there is good reason to believe from the style, method and content that they are not – Sonnet 77, for example, fits well with the 1-17 sequence, and 145’s style and content suggests it is an earlier rather than a later example. The decline in popularity of sonneteering after the burst of activity during the 1590’s probably accounts for the modest sales of Shakespeare’s sonnets in 1609.

Many of the sonnets are intensely personal divulging carnal interests and indulgences while others are deeply emotional, disclosing the author’s most private feelings and emotions. There are also a few compositional variances such as in 146 which lacks a word on the second line, 99 which has an extra line at the start of the first quatrain to take the standard 14-line sonnet to 15 lines, and 126 that has 12 lines instead of 14. For these reasons, it is believed by some that Shakespeare was not involved in their publication and that they may have even been published without his knowledge or consent. Conversely, there is significant form and meaning to the sonnets’ composition that one would not expect from a compiler other than the author: all the Dark Lady sonnets are not listed together for example; instead a couple are together followed by a diversion to a different subject before returning again to the Dark Lady. Additionally, there is no explicit revelation anywhere of the identity of the subjects of the sonnets (though identification via anagrams and assonance is made of Anne Hathaway, Will Shakespeare and Henry Wriothesley) as though they are deliberately kept anonymous. This suggests a careful and attentive hand in the sonnets’ compilation and sequencing which I discuss in greater detail here.

The first 17 of Shakespeare’s 154 sonnets have been traditionally believed to be addressed to a young and beautiful man of social status - the gender of the subject is clear from several of the sonnets in the series. They are all concerned with encouraging the subject to marry and have children to reproduce his beauty and they achieve this with various direct and metaphorical pleas. There have been various suggestions as to who the subject is, the most convincing being either the Earl of Pembroke or the Earl of Southampton, but Sir Robert Dudley (1574-1649) who was the Duke of Northumberland and son of the Earl of Leicester is a compelling candidate too.

The next 109 sonnets (18-126) cover a wide variety of personal subjects and Petrarchan themes and include his very best examples, but a distinct series (78-89) concern The Rival Poet and the apparent demise of Shakespeare’s relationship with his patron. This is a period of high anxiety for Shakespeare that he handles with remarkable self-effacement. It is worth commenting that this 109 sonnet sub-sequence just pips Sidney’s famous sequence of 108 sonnets called “Astrophil and Stella” published in 1591 that was the principal cause of sonnet writings’ popularity during the 1590’s.

Sonnets 127-133 and 147-152 cover the subject of The Dark Lady – a beautiful dark-skinned woman by whom the author experiences wildly different emotions of lust and self-loathing.

The remainder of the sonnets are a mixture of autobiography and emotion ending with two almost throw-away standards that are distinct from the rest, inspired by an anthology of Greek poetry known variously as the Greek Anthology or Palatine Anthology.

We can tell a lot about the character of Shakespeare from these sonnets whilst avoiding the hazards of mis-interpreting what are exercises in Petrarchan themes and revisions of others’ sonnets:

His name was Will, a name he plays on explicitly in at least three sonnets, and many times in other sonnets. His wife was named Anne Hathaway, a name he puns on in one sonnet. He did not benefit from higher education, a fact that he makes clear when comparing himself to those that had “learning” compared to his own “rude ignorance”. He was very generous in his observation of others’ talents especially when comparing them to himself where he showed no vindictiveness despite their threat, but he knew he had a talent of worth to compare with the best. He was not from a noble family, nor did he indulge in noble pursuits, activities that he describes as “not my measure” and at times had contempt for the shallowness of those who pursued royal favour describing them as “obsequious pitiful thrivers”. He was a deep and emotional man who was prone to periods of profound melancholia and had a fear of his own death and his destiny of “a common grave”. He was lusty with “sportive blood” and indulged in heterosexual carnal pleasures with enthusiasm but subsequently suffered from pangs of guilt and self-disgust for what he had indulged in. He was a brilliant man with a rare talent that left us magnificent works of literary art - an Everyman for every man.

Enjoy.

 
 
FIRST LINE
THEME
CRITIQUE?
1
From fairest creatures we desire increase
Young Man
Y
2
When forty winters shall besiege thy brow
"
Y
3
Look in thy glass, and tell the face thou viewest
"
Y
4
Unthrifty loveliness, why dost thou spend
"
Y
5
Those hours that with gentle work did frame
"
Y
6
Then let not winter's ragged hand deface
"
Y
7
Lo, in the orient when the gracious light
"
Y
8
Music to hear, why hear'st thou music sadly?
"
Y
9
Is it for fear to wet a widow's eye
"
Y
10
For shame deny that thou bear'st love to any
"
Y
11
As fast as thou shalt wane, so fast thou grow'st
"
Y
12
When I do count the clock that tells the time
"
Y
13
O that you were yourself! But, love, you are
"
Y
14
Not from the stars do I my judgement pluck
"
Y
15
When I consider every thing that grows
"
Y
16
But wherefore do not you a mightier way
"
Y
17
Who will believe my verse in time to come
"
Y
18
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Beauty
Y
19
Devouring time, blunt thou the lion's paws
Time
Y
20
A woman's face with nature's own hand painted
Beauty
Y
21
So is it not with me as with that muse
Rival Poet
Y
22
My glass shall not persuade me I am old
Heart
Y
23
As an unperfect actor on the stage
The Look of Love
Y
24
Mine eye hath played the painter, and hath steeled
Painting Beauty
Y
25
Let those who are in favour with their stars
Transience of Nobility
Y
26
Lord of my love, to whom in vassalage
Wit
Y
27
Weary with toil I haste me to my bed
Absentee's Lament
Y
28
How can I then return in happy plight
"
Y
29
When, in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes
Good Fortune v. Self-Worth
Y
30
When to the sessions of sweet silent thought
Loss and Sorrow
Y
31
Thy bosom is endeared with all hearts
Love lives on
Y
32
If thou survive my well-contented day
Content over Style
Y
33
Full many a glorious morning have I seen
Clouded Love
Y
34
Why didst thou promise such a beauteous day
"
Y
35
No more be grieved at that which thou hast done 
Fallibility
Y
36
Let me confess that we two must be twain 
Separation
Y
37
As a decrepit father takes delight 
Standing in the Shadow
Y
38
How can my muse want subject to invent 
10th. Muse
Y
39
O, how thy worth with manners may I sing 
Separation
Y
40
Take all my loves, my love, yea, take them all
Total Love
Y
41
Those pretty wrongs that liberty commits 
Youthful Infidelity
Y
42
That thou hast her, it is not all my grief 
Loss of Lover
Y
43
When most I wink, then do mine eyes best see
Chasing shadows
Y
44
If the dull substance of my flesh were thought
Mind over Matter
Y
45
The other two, slight air and purging fire
The 4 Elements
Y
46
Mine eye and heart are at a mortal war 
Visual & Heartfelt Love
Y
47
Betwixt mine eye and heart a league is took 
"
Y
48
How careful was I when I took my way 
Love as a Treasure
Y
49
Against that time if ever that time come 
When Love has gone
Y
50
How heavy do I journey on the way
Journeyman's Lament
Y
51
Thus can my love excuse the slow offence
"
Y
52
So am I as the rich whose blessed key 
Locked up Treasure
Y
53
What is your substance, whereof are you made
Paragon of Beauty
Y
54
O how much more doth beauty beauteous seem 
Perishable Beauty
Y
55
Not marble nor the gilded monuments 
The Power of Verse
Y
56
Sweet love, renew thy force. Be it not said 
Temporary Sadness
Y
57
Being your slave, what should I do but tend 
Idle Hours
Y
58
That God forbid, that made me first your slave 
Your Time is Your Own
Y
59
If there be nothing new, but that which is 
The Past looking at Today
Y
60
Like as the waves make towards the pebbled shore 
Time
Y
61
Is it thy will thy image should keep open 
Sleepless Nights
Y
62
Sin of self-love possesseth all mine eye 
Self-love
Y
63
Against my love shall be as I am now 
Age
Y
64
When I have seen by time's fell hand defaced 
Time
Y
65
Since brass, nor stone, nor earth, nor boundless sea 
"
Y
66
Tired with all these, for restful death I cry 
Weary of Injustice
Y
67
Ah, wherefore with infection should he live 
Loss of Beauty
Y
68
Thus is his cheek the map of days outworn 
Age
Y
69
Those parts of thee that the world's eye doth view 
 Debasing oneself
Y
70
That thou are blamed shall not be thy defect 
Slander
Y
71
No longer mourn for me when I am dead 
After I'm Dead
Y
72
O, lest the world should task you to recite 
"
Y
73
That time of year thou mayst in me behold 
Age
Y
74
But be contented when that fell arrest 
Death
Y
75
So are you to my thoughts as food to life
The Deadly Sins
Y
76
Why is my verse so barren of new pride 
Lost Muse
Y
77
Thy glass will show thee how thy beauties wear 
Age
Y
78
So oft have I invoked thee for my muse 
Rival Poet
Y
79
Whilst I alone did call upon thy aid 
"
Y
80
O, how I faint when I of you do write 
"
Y
81
Or I shall live your epitaph to make
Eulogy to Patron
Y
82
I grant thou wert not married to my muse 
Rival Poet
Y
83
I never saw that you did painting need 
"
Y
84
Who is it that says most which can say more 
"
Y
85
My tongue-tied muse in manners holds her still 
"
Y
86
Was it the proud full sail of his great verse 
"
Y
87
Farewell thou art too dear for my possessing
Loss of Patron
Y
88
When thou shalt be disposed to set me light 
"
Y
89
Say that thou didst forsake me for some fault
"
Y
90
Then hate me when thou wilt, if ever, now 
"
Y
91
Some glory in their birth, some in their skill
What's important to me
Y
92
But do thy worst to steal thyself away 
Betrayal
Y
93
So shall I live supposing thou art true 
"
Y
94
They that have power to hurt and will do none
Sweetness turns Sour
Y
95
How sweet and lovely dost thou make the shame 
Veiled Vices
Y
96
Some say thy fault is youth, some wantonness 
Vices seen as Virtues
Y
97
How like a winter hath my absence been 
Absence
Y
98
From you have I been absent in the spring 
"
Y
99
The forward violet thus did I chide
Floral analogy
Y
100
Where art thou, muse, that thou forget'st so long 
Lost Muse
Y
101
O truant muse, what shall be thy amends
Truth and Beauty
Y
102
My love is strengthened, though more weak in seeming 
Unspoken Love
Y
103
Alack, what poverty my muse brings forth 
Loss of Muse
Y
104
To me, fair friend, you never can be old 
Time
Y
105
Let not my love be called idolatry 
Love's Constancy
Y
106
When in the chronicle of wasted time 
Indescribable Beauty
Y
107
Not mine own fears nor the prophetic soul 
Doom
Y
108
What's in the brain that ink may character 
Eternal Love
Y
109
O never say that I was false of heart
Absence
Y
110
Alas, 'tis true, I have gone here and there 
Neglect
Y
111
O, for my sake do you with fortune chide 
Pity me
Y
112
Your love and pity doth th' impression fill 
So what
Y
113
Since I left you mine eye is in my mind
Out of Sight: In my Mind
Y
114
Or whether doth my mind, being crowned with you
Flatter to Deceive
Y
115
Those lines that I before have writ do lie 
Growing Love
Y
116
Let me not to the marriage of true minds 
Love's Constancy
Y
117
Accuse me thus: that I have scanted all 
Love's Inconstancy
Y
118
Like as, to make our appetites more keen 
Sick with Love
Y
119
What potions have I drunk of siren tears 
Ill with Love
Y
120
That you were once unkind befriends me now
Transgression
Y
121
'Tis better to be vile than vile esteemed 
Vileness
Y
122
Thy gift, thy tables, are within my brain
Unwanted gift
Y
123
No, time, thou shalt not boast that I do change!
Time
Y
124
If my dear love were but the child of state 
Love's Constancy
Y
125
Were 't aught to me I bore the canopy 
Shallowness
Y
126
O thou my lovely boy, who in thy power 
Time versus Nature
Y
127
In the old age black was not counted fair 
The Dark Lady
Y
128
How oft, when thou, my music, music play'st 
To Kiss the Music Player
Y
129
Th' expense of spirit in a waste of shame 
Lust
Y
130
My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun 
Metaphoric parody
Y
131
Thou art as tyrannous so as thou art 
 The Dark Lady
Y
132
Thine eyes I love, and they, as pitying me
"
Y
133
Beshrew that heart that makes my heart to groan 
Ménage à trois
Y
134
So, now I have confessed that he is thine
"
Y
135
Whoever hath her wish, thou hast thy Will 
Will
Y
136
If thy soul check thee that I come so near 
"
Y
137
Thou blind fool love, what dost thou to mine eyes 
Love is Blind
Y
138
When my love swears that she is made of truth
Deceit
Y
139
O, call not me to justify the wrong 
If Looks could Kill
Y
140
Be wise as thou art cruel; do not press 
Disdain
Y
141
In faith, I do not love thee with mine eyes 
Foolish Heart
Y
142
Love is my sin, and thy dear virtue hate 
Pity
Y
143
Lo, as a care-full housewife runs to catch 
Will
Y
144
Two loves I have, of comfort and despair 
Ménage à trois
Y
145
Those lips that love's own hand did make 
Anne Hathaway
Y
146
Poor soul, the centre of my sinful earth
Soul
Y
147
My love is as a fever, longing still
The Dark Lady
Y
148
O me, what eyes hath love put in my head 
I Love
Y
149
Canst thou, O cruel, say I love thee not 
Love is Blind
Y
150
O, from what power hast thou this powerful might
Unworthy Love
Y
151
Love is too young to know what conscience is 
Betrayal
Y
152
In loving thee thou know'st I am forsworn 
I Lie
Y
153
Cupid laid by his brand and fell asleep 
Cupid
Y
154
The little love-god lying once asleep 
"
Y
 
COMMENT
SONNET NUMBER
FIRST LINE
STATISTIC
Most verbose Sonnet
42
That thou hast her, it is not all my grief
130 words
Most verbally diverse Sonnet
17
Who will believe my verse in time to come
93 different words
Least verbose Sonnet (and one of the least verbally diverse)
66
Tired with all these, for restful death I cry
89 words
Least verbally diverse Sonnet
53
What is your substance, whereof are you made
67 different words
Highest different/total words ratio
5
Those hours that with gentle work did frame
83%
Lowest different/total words ratio
136
If thy soul check thee that I come so near
56%

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